Comment from Ben B.

Excellent

Well this is a interesting choice for your contest entry: Most people choose cute horses you chose a scrawny one. You sure made horse riding tough, probably because it is.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020

My skinny horse in the poem was feeling the wind chill factor. They breed them tough in New Zealand for use in the high country when mustering sheep and cattle, but I was empathizing with the horse because I don't like it when it is windy myself.
Thanks for reviewing!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a rather superb entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest. I love the wording, and though the artwork seems to agree with the narrative, the poem stands alone. Well done, beautifully written, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. I was feeling sorry for a skinny horse not enjoying the wind chill factor up in the mountains.

reply by royowen on 16-Aug-2020

I don?t blame it,

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 Nature poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. I was feeling sorry for a skinny horse not enjoying the wind chill factor up in the mountains.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a vivid use of words that captures a clear scene of a horse in the wind. He is thin so he is affected by the strong wind. Excellent rhyming of scrawny and tawny.

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. I was feeling sorry for a skinny horse not enjoying the wind chill factor up in the mountains.