Love Long Distance
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Comment from elchupakabra
First off, congratulations on a completed works, that process is grueling so kudos to you for making it through to the other side :) Excellent work and thanks for sharing, this was a great way to wrap up :) Later daze.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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First off, congratulations on a completed works, that process is grueling so kudos to you for making it through to the other side :) Excellent work and thanks for sharing, this was a great way to wrap up :) Later daze.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this last chapter. Also thank you for the congratulations. Yes, process is grueling, but worth it. We really appreciate your support. We are now writing our next book. Coming soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a beautiful, but sad ending, Bill and Cathy. It was lovely reading what the children grew up to be. Sad that Cathy died still too young at 73, You have done an amazing job writing this novel between you. Well done, and good luck with your sales. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful, but sad ending, Bill and Cathy. It was lovely reading what the children grew up to be. Sad that Cathy died still too young at 73, You have done an amazing job writing this novel between you. Well done, and good luck with your sales. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for reading, reviewing and supporting us! We're so glad you enjoyed the ending. Yes, very sad, but they had a beautiful life together! :) Sorry for delay again. In between tons of work, there was also a move! Thank you also for the good luck. We are now busy on another book with 13 chapters (first draft) done! We'll post some soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It would be good to do a book review and a synopsis of your joint venture so that it tells all your Fanstory friends what the book is about? Is it a love story? Have you and Bill Bishop actually met? Are you lovers? How was the story conceived? This information may encourage everyone to buy your book. It's just a thought and I wish you luck with the sales, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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It would be good to do a book review and a synopsis of your joint venture so that it tells all your Fanstory friends what the book is about? Is it a love story? Have you and Bill Bishop actually met? Are you lovers? How was the story conceived? This information may encourage everyone to buy your book. It's just a thought and I wish you luck with the sales, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Hi Dolly, First of all, thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter. There is a video on this profile page that talks about us co-writing. Check it out! The story just happened, as did us meeting each other. The rest is a mystery! :) Thank you also for the good luck. We are currently working on our next book and hope to post some of it soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a lovely ending chapter. What happened to everyone was a bonus. The poem was precious. The two videos were icing on the cake. I hope this book reaches #1! God bless both of you.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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What a lovely ending chapter. What happened to everyone was a bonus. The poem was precious. The two videos were icing on the cake. I hope this book reaches #1! God bless both of you.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Hi Rebekah! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and review. HURRAH! Thank you also for your continued support and best wishes. We "SALUTE" you! We're currently working on our next book and will post a chapter of it soon. Wishing you all the best and God bless you too!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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You're quite welcome!
I'm on pins and needles about a new book.
Comment from nomi338
Wow! What an epic story. I came of age around the same time much of this story took place. I was in the Air Force from 1960 to 1964. I serves 18 months in Okinawa before it became Japan. Unlike the hero in this story I made a point of not having a love interest while in the military serving overseas. By the time I was discharged, I started a brand new chapter in my life that was nothing like any part of my past life.I totally approve of tis great love and life story.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Wow! What an epic story. I came of age around the same time much of this story took place. I was in the Air Force from 1960 to 1964. I serves 18 months in Okinawa before it became Japan. Unlike the hero in this story I made a point of not having a love interest while in the military serving overseas. By the time I was discharged, I started a brand new chapter in my life that was nothing like any part of my past life.I totally approve of tis great love and life story.
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Hi Nomi, Thanks for stopping by to read and review this last chapter. We're so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you also for sharing. We're currently working on our next book and will post a chapter of it soon. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is an amazing conclusion to a part of your story that I apparently missed! I found it riveting, and I wish I had a six to give you, but I think you're well on your way to success. I'm a little confused about whether Cathy just died in the story, or also in real life? I hope not, but if it's true, I'm so sorry, Bill. Your poem is just heart-wrenching and incredibly beautiful -- a commando poet!
I love your wedding story. Daisies are my favorite, and were a feature at my wedding, too. My husband and I didn't jump over my grandmother's broom, however -- that's a tradition I've never heard of! I didn't realize that you'd had twins, either -- how wonderful!
I loved the video clip of JFK's inaugural address. At the age of three, I would have been a little too young to appreciate it. And I did enjoy hearing the recording you also included, of Dolly Parton.
Thank you for sharing your fantastic story!
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This is an amazing conclusion to a part of your story that I apparently missed! I found it riveting, and I wish I had a six to give you, but I think you're well on your way to success. I'm a little confused about whether Cathy just died in the story, or also in real life? I hope not, but if it's true, I'm so sorry, Bill. Your poem is just heart-wrenching and incredibly beautiful -- a commando poet!
I love your wedding story. Daisies are my favorite, and were a feature at my wedding, too. My husband and I didn't jump over my grandmother's broom, however -- that's a tradition I've never heard of! I didn't realize that you'd had twins, either -- how wonderful!
I loved the video clip of JFK's inaugural address. At the age of three, I would have been a little too young to appreciate it. And I did enjoy hearing the recording you also included, of Dolly Parton.
Thank you for sharing your fantastic story!
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Hi Mary Kay, We're so glad you enjoyed this last chapter. Awesome review! Thank you so much! Cathy didn't die - only in the story. :) We are currently working on our next book and will post a chapter soon. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Oh, Cathy, what great news to hear, that you only died in the story, I am so relieved! Thank you for letting me know. I am also happy to learn that there will be another book :-)
God bless you both! Love, Mary Kay xoxo