Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Enfolding Eternity"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Jacob David Collins
When a person is in love with another they feel at one of the world and the rest of reality. Another excellent, strong piece of writing Yvette, I really liked how you put this together. I loved it!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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When a person is in love with another they feel at one of the world and the rest of reality. Another excellent, strong piece of writing Yvette, I really liked how you put this together. I loved it!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, J-D, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This renga entry, Enfolding Eternity, expands the theme of nature and color into the realm of humanity and the love which makes it move.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This renga entry, Enfolding Eternity, expands the theme of nature and color into the realm of humanity and the love which makes it move.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Bill, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 7/7 in addition to the multi-author Renga book. When two hearts are beating the same rhythm they will easily become as one in a love relationship.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 7/7 in addition to the multi-author Renga book. When two hearts are beating the same rhythm they will easily become as one in a love relationship.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Sandra, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from elchupakabra
This was a great short piece, I like the alliteration in the title and the piece itself represents well. Your voice shines through, overall, it's just very well done. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This was a great short piece, I like the alliteration in the title and the piece itself represents well. Your voice shines through, overall, it's just very well done. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
This is such an important message. If we would accept and appreciate the rhythm of love all else would fall into place. It is because we resist the rhythm that the suffering occurs. Thank you so much my friend for sharing this pivotal message. I also love the visual choice.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This is such an important message. If we would accept and appreciate the rhythm of love all else would fall into place. It is because we resist the rhythm that the suffering occurs. Thank you so much my friend for sharing this pivotal message. I also love the visual choice.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hey there, Stranger - good to see your smile!! ;) :) Thanx so much, Sandra, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We have no choice but embrace our world as this is all we have and you remind us here that we should keep our hearts open and let the rhythm in, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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We have no choice but embrace our world as this is all we have and you remind us here that we should keep our hearts open and let the rhythm in, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Dolly, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Susan X Smith
Your notes give interesting information on this couplet. It does have a Japanese flavor that I love and the words flow nicely. The picture is a great addition. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Your notes give interesting information on this couplet. It does have a Japanese flavor that I love and the words flow nicely. The picture is a great addition. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Susan, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is quite a passion-filled 7-7 addition to the on-going renga. I was thinking maybe change the inversion in the second line to: we embrace this world's rhythm. I suppose you were thinking the word 'embrace' needed more emphasis than the word rhythm. Interesting post!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This is quite a passion-filled 7-7 addition to the on-going renga. I was thinking maybe change the inversion in the second line to: we embrace this world's rhythm. I suppose you were thinking the word 'embrace' needed more emphasis than the word rhythm. Interesting post!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Crystie, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
This follows Gypsy poem wonderfully as you have carried the cycle of love to our world, "enfolding eternity" what a beautiful title, very well written, stay well and stay safe****kahpot
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This follows Gypsy poem wonderfully as you have carried the cycle of love to our world, "enfolding eternity" what a beautiful title, very well written, stay well and stay safe****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, kahpot, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
I don't know anything about this style and I am not in the poetry chain. I do get the message of this work. It's hard to find a rhythm in this day and age.
DA Z ð???
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hello Yvette.
I don't know anything about this style and I am not in the poetry chain. I do get the message of this work. It's hard to find a rhythm in this day and age.
DA Z ð???
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Z, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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Hey Yvette. You're welcome. Hope your house sells quickly. Mortgage rates are the lowest ever right now. I remember our house in 1979 had a Jimmy Carter interest rate of 18 1/2 %.
DA Z :~))