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Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Spirit of the Lotus"
Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
What a beautiful and ambient presentation June, I loved the flower here and I felt it spirit within your words as we liken this to the human spirit, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
Thank you so much~ Glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from
Mark D. R.
June
Your fragile poem adds another good chapter to this renga collaboration. Your title adds a nuance to your verse, which makes the total presentation a very good one.
Mark
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
Thank you so much~ Glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from
dragonpoet
June,
This is beautiful artwork used to illustrate philosophical words. The opening of a flower is a good metaphor for the birth of faith
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
reply by dragonpoet on 10-Aug-2020
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