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Renga Multi-Author Book

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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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What a beautiful and ambient presentation June, I loved the flower here and I felt it spirit within your words as we liken this to the human spirit, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much~ Glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from Mark D. R.
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June

Your fragile poem adds another good chapter to this renga collaboration. Your title adds a nuance to your verse, which makes the total presentation a very good one.

Mark

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much~ Glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from dragonpoet
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June,
This is beautiful artwork used to illustrate philosophical words. The opening of a flower is a good metaphor for the birth of faith
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
reply by dragonpoet on 10-Aug-2020
    My pleasure, June.
    Joan