Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Reality light candle for us - I think you capture the essence of the crazy times we are living.. and we don't know when it's going to end. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Hugs,

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for the gentle words to capture this "harsh reality." We do need to calm ourselves and "light a candle for us." Looking forward to how this poem will continue in the book!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Hugs,

Gypsy

Comment from Carlos' girl

Excellent

What a beautiful and plaintive request in last phrase " light candle for us". Irresistible. Who would fail to honor such a heartfelt request?!
Nice presentation of the poem also.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Effective presentation with fire colors--imagery stark and straightforward--apropos for the sobering theme. Pandemic speaks for itself--no need for fancy metaphor. Cheers. LIZ

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020

Thank you very much, Elizabeth. I don't like poems that are hard to understand.

reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 10-Aug-2020

Same here--I am metaphorically challenged!