The Darkness
The Dark contest entry.12 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I wonder if Harley newly blind? It seems so, because she is not afraid of the darkness, nor does she ask why she is in the dark, and make no attempt to find a light source. She is bumping things and making her way to bed, as if trying to adapt to her new condition.
Very interesting entry.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Hmm, I wonder if Harley newly blind? It seems so, because she is not afraid of the darkness, nor does she ask why she is in the dark, and make no attempt to find a light source. She is bumping things and making her way to bed, as if trying to adapt to her new condition.
Very interesting entry.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Ben B.
I really like your flash fiction. Honestly though, I wouldn't label it as a humor story. It definitely has atmosphere, but it felt a little more on the frightening side.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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I really like your flash fiction. Honestly though, I wouldn't label it as a humor story. It definitely has atmosphere, but it felt a little more on the frightening side.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thanks! I put it in the horror category. Thanks for letting me know. I'm glad you enjoyed my story!