Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Good Morning, June!
Oh! What a wonderful follow-up couplet to Yvette's Haiku poem! And, indeed, your thoughts are "spot on!" I to to bed thinking of writing, and when I awake, the same things happens: "fantasy take first deep breaths!"

Beautiful imagery!

Thank you!
diane

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

So glad this resonated with you! It's been fun adding to the book of Renga - but a challenge to have an appropriate followup. Thanks for the positive feedback.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Another great chapter in the renga chapters, a great new chapter and a great progression, yes indeed, a very perceptive haiku in the series June, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

Thank you for the positive feedback. Always appreciate your input.

reply by royowen on 07-Aug-2020

Welcome June

Comment from Cindy Decker

Excellent

June, a very nice couplet for the multi author book. Fantasies take first deep breaths, is an exceptional way of describing The passion writers feel. Fantastic work.
Best wishes,
Cindy

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback!

Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

I really like this piece and I think it will speak to all of us here on FanStory as we're all exploring our creative side :) Really great work on this short piece, thank you for sharing. Later daze.

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

Thanks for the positive feedback!