Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "From Imagination to Ink"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Bichon
Even though your poem was short, you have captured the elements of creativity excellently. Especially the beckoning of fantasy ideas entering your mind! A great poem.
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Even though your poem was short, you have captured the elements of creativity excellently. Especially the beckoning of fantasy ideas entering your mind! A great poem.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, beautiful Chloe, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a nice poem that expressed the writing process visually and figuratively. I really like the chosen art piece as well. You are a very good poet.
I'm not allowed to give 6 stars. Otherwise I would.
I have entered mine for chapter 45 and everyone seems to light it. Will we get a hard copy when the book is done with 184 chapters?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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What a nice poem that expressed the writing process visually and figuratively. I really like the chosen art piece as well. You are a very good poet.
I'm not allowed to give 6 stars. Otherwise I would.
I have entered mine for chapter 45 and everyone seems to light it. Will we get a hard copy when the book is done with 184 chapters?
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Lisa -- good to hear from you again... and, no, no hardcopy: your input is for posterity and your fingers keyboard perusals... LOL! :) :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this one... with 'downsizing', classes starting, and trying to get my two boys back to school this week, things are nuts!! ;) Take care and stop by anytime! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Another excellent segment added to this renga effort. To give it the break you meant, I would add some punctuation mark after ... pen awakens
Mark
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Yvette,
Another excellent segment added to this renga effort. To give it the break you meant, I would add some punctuation mark after ... pen awakens
Mark
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Mark, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are so right. When something comes into the mind, all of the sudden you can get it down on paper with hardly a mistake. Then editing becomes a joy.
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You are so right. When something comes into the mind, all of the sudden you can get it down on paper with hardly a mistake. Then editing becomes a joy.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Rebecca, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated, my lady!! ;) ;)
Sorry so short - determined to get caught up today even though we're packing and bring the two boys here back to school Thursday and Friday (on top of everything else - ugh!) Take care of you!! ;) Yvette
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You can't say your life is empty! I'll be praying for you.
Comment from Colin John
Hi Yvette, this is surely true and you have written it fantastically to emphasize this, a good one to remember, and shame it's not in a competition. Cheers Colin x
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Hi Yvette, this is surely true and you have written it fantastically to emphasize this, a good one to remember, and shame it's not in a competition. Cheers Colin x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Colin, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
I like the picture choice, Yvette, it brings to mind the creation of fantasy. I also like the concept of the renga book. Your words capture the need and desire for a poet to write, to create. Very well done.
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I like the picture choice, Yvette, it brings to mind the creation of fantasy. I also like the concept of the renga book. Your words capture the need and desire for a poet to write, to create. Very well done.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Alie, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated, my lady!! ;) ;) Yvette
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Most welcome, my friend.
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a great short piece about finding inspiration as a writer. I don't really consider myself a poet, but I dabble. Great work on this and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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This is a great short piece about finding inspiration as a writer. I don't really consider myself a poet, but I dabble. Great work on this and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much for your review -- have a wonderful week out there! ;)
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
Yes, Yes, Yes. So very true. You have another beauty here my friend. What a great confirmation of how you are inspired to your art. I love the picture you chose as a compliment. So beautiful and powerful. It was a good time to return to the site to see this piece. Thank you my friend.
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Yes, Yes, Yes. So very true. You have another beauty here my friend. What a great confirmation of how you are inspired to your art. I love the picture you chose as a compliment. So beautiful and powerful. It was a good time to return to the site to see this piece. Thank you my friend.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Sandra, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated, my lady!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
presentation, Yvette.
-A well written poem
to add to Gypsy's book.
-Good syllable count,
topic, and imagery.
-I also l like the personification
in the poem and the concluding line, too.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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-Great artwork and
presentation, Yvette.
-A well written poem
to add to Gypsy's book.
-Good syllable count,
topic, and imagery.
-I also l like the personification
in the poem and the concluding line, too.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thanx again, Pam, for your wonderful support -- always enjoy hearing from you and seeing those bright flowers, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette, and I am glad you like the flowers. They were beauties this season.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 in addition to the multi-author Renga book that develops into quite an amazing story from the beginning with many turns it take to lead to an unexpected ending.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 in addition to the multi-author Renga book that develops into quite an amazing story from the beginning with many turns it take to lead to an unexpected ending.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Sandra, for dropping by on this one -- you are always so appreciated, my lady!! ;) ;) Yvette