Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "His Words Bring Joy"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two-line addition to Roy's 5-7-5 to continue the flow if the Multi-author Renga book. When we are silent we can hear God's wisdom in the breeze shuffling the tree leaves.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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A very well-written two-line addition to Roy's 5-7-5 to continue the flow if the Multi-author Renga book. When we are silent we can hear God's wisdom in the breeze shuffling the tree leaves.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Oh, that is lovely! I really like how you said, " When we are silent we can hear God's wisdom in the breeze shuffling the tree leaves." Thank you for the beautiful review, Sandra! Hugs!!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This 7-7 seems to be a feast of alliteration. I am glad you posted author notes, since the renga is still fairly new to me. I like the 'w' alliteration and the 's' alliteration, plus it sounds like helpful advice or a true observation.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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This 7-7 seems to be a feast of alliteration. I am glad you posted author notes, since the renga is still fairly new to me. I like the 'w' alliteration and the 's' alliteration, plus it sounds like helpful advice or a true observation.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I hope you'll join in the fun - if the latest poem inspires you to write a poem, write us one. (575 or 77 depending on the chapter) Appreciate the thoughtful review, Crystie! Hugs!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Helen, this Renga is becoming richer and richer as it makes it's rounds. Soon it will have us standing at the gates of heaven. Where can it go from there except to enter and describe what is found there-in.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Dear Helen, this Renga is becoming richer and richer as it makes it's rounds. Soon it will have us standing at the gates of heaven. Where can it go from there except to enter and describe what is found there-in.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your lovely spiritual reading of these poems! Hugs!
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, I just love this.
Because to read the Word IS
a spiritual feast, and much joy
is the result. Just beautiful,
blessings...
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Oh, I just love this.
Because to read the Word IS
a spiritual feast, and much joy
is the result. Just beautiful,
blessings...
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Miss Judy! I felt that was Roy's message, too so it just naturally fell in place. Hope you'll join in the renga book, too. Hugs!
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Hugs to you...Happy Weekend!!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely! Elegant imagery and masterful alliteration in S and W and SW (SWeet Song... god'S Word. A superb addition to the renga--keep it flowing! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Lovely! Elegant imagery and masterful alliteration in S and W and SW (SWeet Song... god'S Word. A superb addition to the renga--keep it flowing! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, Liz! Appreciate you! Hugs!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Dear Hellen, I just love the musicality of these lines - wind whisper wisdom, and the rest is history, God is feasting with us. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Dear Hellen, I just love the musicality of these lines - wind whisper wisdom, and the rest is history, God is feasting with us. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Love how you said that "God is feasting with us." How often we don't know that we are "feasting with Him!" Thanks for the lovely words! Hugs!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Helen, with this renga. I like the alliteration of 'w' and 's'. Your message is strong. Just because one cannot see God, we know He is there and always will be there. The idea of His words floating on the wind for us is awesome. Yes, it is possible to believe what one cannot see.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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You did a great job, Helen, with this renga. I like the alliteration of 'w' and 's'. Your message is strong. Just because one cannot see God, we know He is there and always will be there. The idea of His words floating on the wind for us is awesome. Yes, it is possible to believe what one cannot see.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your understanding review, Jan! Hugs!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made great use of your fourteen syllables in this lovely, spiritual piece, conveying a strong message about the power of God's Word. Excellent metaphors
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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You have made great use of your fourteen syllables in this lovely, spiritual piece, conveying a strong message about the power of God's Word. Excellent metaphors
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Janice! Hope you'll join the book. Hugs!
Comment from Colin John
Hi Helen, a great photo explanation and lovely words in you 7-7, if this was in a completion surely it would do well if not win. Kind regards and thank you for sharing.x
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Hi Helen, a great photo explanation and lovely words in you 7-7, if this was in a completion surely it would do well if not win. Kind regards and thank you for sharing.x
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Colin. It's not a contest - it's a multi-author book and you are most welcome to join us. If the latest poem sparks some inspiration write us your response in the next chapter. Blessings!
Comment from roof35
The poem is lovely and the illustration pairs well. I think you do have a typo. Check out the spelling of whispers. Otherwise, this is very nicely done and a good follow-up to the 575.
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The poem is lovely and the illustration pairs well. I think you do have a typo. Check out the spelling of whispers. Otherwise, this is very nicely done and a good follow-up to the 575.
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, Judy! I'll go check now. Appreciate you! Hugs!
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Thanks again! I rarely type write into a post but I thought since it's just two lines...well, that should teach me!