Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "To reflect..."Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this thought provoking work and the message conveyed in it. I know that many worthwhile things are birthed in our lives through contemplation and meditation on the word of God. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I like this thought provoking work and the message conveyed in it. I know that many worthwhile things are birthed in our lives through contemplation and meditation on the word of God. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thanks Jeffrey, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings,, Roy
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad you are continuing to contribute to Gypsy's renga book. It's such a blessing to have the Holy Spirit guide our contemplation so that we can feast on spiritual wisdom!
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I wonder if you meant "Contemplation's task"
And the last line has four syllables but perhaps you aren't doing a traditional 5-7-5....
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I'm so glad you are continuing to contribute to Gypsy's renga book. It's such a blessing to have the Holy Spirit guide our contemplation so that we can feast on spiritual wisdom!
Comments:
I wonder if you meant "Contemplation's task"
And the last line has four syllables but perhaps you aren't doing a traditional 5-7-5....
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thanks Helen. for these brilliant comments and review, blessings,, Roy
Comment from mermaids
The food we cannot see is spiritual food and your poem reminds the reader to feast on spiritual food, food not seen. Your last line is a perfect ending to your words. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
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The food we cannot see is spiritual food and your poem reminds the reader to feast on spiritual food, food not seen. Your last line is a perfect ending to your words. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thanks for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings,, Roy
Comment from Cindy Decker
Roy, I don't have 6 stars, or you'd get them. Your poem is tantalizingly short, but beautiful because Jesus is all we'll ever need. You say this in your poem. What a wonderful feast it is--it starts on earth.
Have a wonderful week, Roy,
Blessings, Cindy.
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Roy, I don't have 6 stars, or you'd get them. Your poem is tantalizingly short, but beautiful because Jesus is all we'll ever need. You say this in your poem. What a wonderful feast it is--it starts on earth.
Have a wonderful week, Roy,
Blessings, Cindy.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thanks Cindy, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings,, Roy