The Dick
500 Word Flash Fiction15 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL This was a fun contest entry to read. I really enjoyed reading. It caused me to smile often. You told a very entertaining story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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LOL This was a fun contest entry to read. I really enjoyed reading. It caused me to smile often. You told a very entertaining story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and your kind review. I appreciate both! Bill
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A crook through and through feeling cornered by the police officer for...nothing of his stolen things, just to ask for a donation! Well, the nerve to think of giving a false hundred dollar and asking for change! He really is a bad guy.
Very funny flash fiction! I liked it.
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A crook through and through feeling cornered by the police officer for...nothing of his stolen things, just to ask for a donation! Well, the nerve to think of giving a false hundred dollar and asking for change! He really is a bad guy.
Very funny flash fiction! I liked it.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and your kind review. I appreciate both! Bill
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welcome.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Bhogg,
This is a marvelous flash fiction for the contest with some good humor
throughout the story.
The ending looked like it was going to sputter, but the last line came through perfectly.
Great picture of Jack Webb (hat and all) from Dragnet or one of the others shows.
This show do well in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hello Bhogg,
This is a marvelous flash fiction for the contest with some good humor
throughout the story.
The ending looked like it was going to sputter, but the last line came through perfectly.
Great picture of Jack Webb (hat and all) from Dragnet or one of the others shows.
This show do well in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and for your kind and generous review! I appreciate both.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, that's one brazen master criminal. And, I didn't know Porsche made anything vanilla! Nice style--a little Elmore Leonard, a little Raymond Chandler.
Funny, I'd get nervous if I saw a cop on my doorstep, too. And I drive a Volvo station wagon.
Best of luck, Bill.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Ah, that's one brazen master criminal. And, I didn't know Porsche made anything vanilla! Nice style--a little Elmore Leonard, a little Raymond Chandler.
Funny, I'd get nervous if I saw a cop on my doorstep, too. And I drive a Volvo station wagon.
Best of luck, Bill.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Well of course you'd feel nervous...You have things to hide. The Volvo station wagon is a dead giveaway!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Your ending made me laugh out loud. The guy inside thought he might be getting arrested, and all it was -
"...I'm just collecting for the Policeman's Benevolent Society. Can we count on you for a donation?"
lol. This is hilarious. A very well written story, with a great use of a dialogue, Hitchcock-like suspense and a great descriptive imagery.
I loved it. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Your ending made me laugh out loud. The guy inside thought he might be getting arrested, and all it was -
"...I'm just collecting for the Policeman's Benevolent Society. Can we count on you for a donation?"
lol. This is hilarious. A very well written story, with a great use of a dialogue, Hitchcock-like suspense and a great descriptive imagery.
I loved it. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and for your kind review. I appreciate both! Bill
