Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Sentinels..."Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Gloria ....
There is always something mystical about sentinels to me. As they are the guardians of a passageway that must be figured out or understood before entry is granted.
This is a fine entry into the Renga book, and your entire presentation superb.
Gloria
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There is always something mystical about sentinels to me. As they are the guardians of a passageway that must be figured out or understood before entry is granted.
This is a fine entry into the Renga book, and your entire presentation superb.
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Bless you dear girl, always an encouragement, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your addition to the book, Roy. Your picture and well-chosen words match nicely. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like how you expressed that these 'sentinels' are there to hear our prayers and send them to Heaven.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your addition to the book, Roy. Your picture and well-chosen words match nicely. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like how you expressed that these 'sentinels' are there to hear our prayers and send them to Heaven.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thanks Jan, you?re a great encouragement and inspiration Bless you Roy,
Comment from Gert sherwood
Roy your renga haiku...Sentinels...
is a wonderful and peaceful way to ask for prayers from Our creator (God) Thank you for sharing.
Gert
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Roy your renga haiku...Sentinels...
is a wonderful and peaceful way to ask for prayers from Our creator (God) Thank you for sharing.
Gert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thanks , for these lovely comments and a wonderful review, Blessings Roy,
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Smiles to you Roy and you are welcome
Gert
Comment from lightink
Hi Roy, that's a amazing image! I love the mountains as 'sentinels' and 'masts' with a specific special purpose :). Imaginative and certainly very enriching for this series!
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Hi Roy, that's a amazing image! I love the mountains as 'sentinels' and 'masts' with a specific special purpose :). Imaginative and certainly very enriching for this series!
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from richie b
Roy,
Hopefully we have an Armada of prayers and
praises constantly addressing our Lord.
Peace,
Richie
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Roy,
Hopefully we have an Armada of prayers and
praises constantly addressing our Lord.
Peace,
Richie
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much Richie, for these wonderful comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy