Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "I can See for Miles and Miles"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from rama devi
Nice satori AHA in that closing line. Nice imagery and presentation. Great to see this book continuing to grow, expanding into that space! Fine consonance of P and alliteration of M.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Nice satori AHA in that closing line. Nice imagery and presentation. Great to see this book continuing to grow, expanding into that space! Fine consonance of P and alliteration of M.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and valuable feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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You too!
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Well said. What a great description of the view from a mountain. The recognition of God's creation and it would be hard to find a better spot from which to enjoy the beauty. Great line: "God's personal space..."
Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Well said. What a great description of the view from a mountain. The recognition of God's creation and it would be hard to find a better spot from which to enjoy the beauty. Great line: "God's personal space..."
Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing me :)
gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
Well, the journey continues with an amazing stopover in God's personal space. No boundaries here. Feel free to choose your own path - by adding a great couplet!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Well, the journey continues with an amazing stopover in God's personal space. No boundaries here. Feel free to choose your own path - by adding a great couplet!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, June. I can't wait to see what comes next :)
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this! Yes, being on the mountaintop gives us a whole new perspective and God doesn't need any set personal space. He's everywhere and right with us!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Loved this! Yes, being on the mountaintop gives us a whole new perspective and God doesn't need any set personal space. He's everywhere and right with us!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Helen, I hope you are feeling well and happy.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from lightink
Probably one of the most memorable satori lines I've read! Striking reframing for the awe inspiring vastness on the mountain view! I so wish I had a six for this!
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Probably one of the most memorable satori lines I've read! Striking reframing for the awe inspiring vastness on the mountain view! I so wish I had a six for this!
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Jyoti, you are very kind. I am happy you like it.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from royowen
I've had the privilege of seeing some of these God spaces, may God be blessed, to have seen some of the most beautiful landscapes the world has to offer. SME right here where I live. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I've had the privilege of seeing some of these God spaces, may God be blessed, to have seen some of the most beautiful landscapes the world has to offer. SME right here where I live. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy, I hope you are feeling well and happy.
hugs,
gypsy
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I?m fine Gypsy, you?
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I'm good :) thank you, Roy
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Bless you