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Fall in New England

A Rondaful Poem

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hi June... I enjoyed your version of the Rondaful. The Autumn in New England is always so lovely that it was a good choice of theme... and that artwork is soooo pretty. A lovely poem!! :)

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this. I have been wanting to try out Dolly's new format. Thanks for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Teri7
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June, This is a very beautiful and well written rondeau poem about the fall in New England. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this. I have been wanting to try out Dolly's new format. Thanks for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Fall in New England
by June Sargent

Hello, June,

Nice job...such beautiful imagery. I love New England in the fall. I like the Rondaful Poem form. Well done my friend.

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this. I have been wanting to try out Dolly's new format. Thanks for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, such a vivid employment of Dolly's form, June -- love this, my lady! ;) You manage to touch on emotions and even the senses of touch and sight with your words... great job! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this. I have been wanting to try out Dolly's new format. Thanks for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Good Morning, June!
You've encapsulated the delights of autumn very well in your Rondaful!
What an interesting and creative poetic format!
Kudos to Dolly for creating it, and kudos to you for mastering its form!
Here's to cooler weather... and, hopefully, cooler heads! :)

Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this. I have been wanting to try out Dolly's new format. Thanks for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wow June! You cracked this form perfectly and brought a wonderful scene to my eyes, I want to visit now. Your Rondaful is charming.

The eight line I think you mean '(bring) happy smiles"

A well deserved six, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020

Comment from Eternal Muse
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An excellent job on this new form, dear June. I loved your rich imagery, your moving visuals, your artistic presentation and photo, your flawless use of iambic meter and internal rhymes.

This was a treat.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thank you! It took a little maneuvering to get this format down pat. But I had fun. Fall in New England is beautiful - but I doubt there will be many country fairs this year...I appreciate the generous rating!
Comment from Vanna1
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What a nice sweet poem. Full of color and enthusiasm. The theme is refreshing and light hearted. Good presentation to go with it as well. Happy writing!

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much!