Sunday Funday
An uplifting poem for these times.49 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Sounds like a relaxing evening, dear. I love how the assonance of I sounds like rhyme and internal rhyme. Fine counterpoint of S sounds as well. Well done! Musically sound. Good flow. Portrays a scene with few words.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Sounds like a relaxing evening, dear. I love how the assonance of I sounds like rhyme and internal rhyme. Fine counterpoint of S sounds as well. Well done! Musically sound. Good flow. Portrays a scene with few words.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your great comments, rd.
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:-))
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Thank you for your comments.
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:-) xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely upbeat poem which is so welcome in these troublesome times. Great artwork and message reminding us of another time and place.
Well done
Blessings and stay well
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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A lovely upbeat poem which is so welcome in these troublesome times. Great artwork and message reminding us of another time and place.
Well done
Blessings and stay well
Janet
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you Janet.
Comment from Debra White
Hi Amada :)
I enjoyed your light 5-7-9 poem.
What a fine way to spend a Sunday (although my preference would be classical music rather than jazz!)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hi Amada :)
I enjoyed your light 5-7-9 poem.
What a fine way to spend a Sunday (although my preference would be classical music rather than jazz!)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your beautiful words, Debra.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Sunday Funday indeed. We need the uplift as you say. Clever twist--need to rest...your feet--high on rose couch--I can vividly see that--and I've got poor visualization skills. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Sunday Funday indeed. We need the uplift as you say. Clever twist--need to rest...your feet--high on rose couch--I can vividly see that--and I've got poor visualization skills. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading my work, Liz.
Comment from elchupakabra
Sunday Funday means different things to different people I suppose XD For me it means it's time to kick back, watch some football and track my fantasy team. This was a good piece, thanks for sharing, later daze.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Sunday Funday means different things to different people I suppose XD For me it means it's time to kick back, watch some football and track my fantasy team. This was a good piece, thanks for sharing, later daze.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading this work.
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds more like appetizers than a meal, unless you are a vegetarian. It does sound relaxing though
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This sounds more like appetizers than a meal, unless you are a vegetarian. It does sound relaxing though
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your good wishes.
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You're welcome on both accounts.
dp
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Thank you for commenting in my work.
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Thank you for your great comments in my poem.
Comment from Boogienights
This is great. Can I join you? Its sounds like a fantastic sunday afternoon, especially the jazz...my dad loved it and instilled a love of this music in me. Time to go buy some bread and cheese. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This is great. Can I join you? Its sounds like a fantastic sunday afternoon, especially the jazz...my dad loved it and instilled a love of this music in me. Time to go buy some bread and cheese. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Biigie Nights, jazz is great music for the soul, and the bread and chesse, for the body, and the wine for a good laugh. Enjoy each sunday.
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Great review to my work. Thank you for your time. Have a great Sunday.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Great artistic presentation. Wine and cheese, ah... it's been a long time since I've been in a wine and cheese restaurant. Your words made me hungry (smile).
I liked your humor and wit in the last line.
This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Great artistic presentation. Wine and cheese, ah... it's been a long time since I've been in a wine and cheese restaurant. Your words made me hungry (smile).
I liked your humor and wit in the last line.
This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you reading my work and for your good wishes. Happy Sunday to youu.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem was like a short vacation. Your wording was so vivid, I felt myself performing the actions. We all need that after work or hard play. Your poem has universal appeal. That glass of wine looks good.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Your poem was like a short vacation. Your wording was so vivid, I felt myself performing the actions. We all need that after work or hard play. Your poem has universal appeal. That glass of wine looks good.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Your comments are delightful, dear writer. Thank you for the six stars as well. Magic in this sunday!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Sunday Funday", is short,succinct and extremely well-written. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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"Sunday Funday", is short,succinct and extremely well-written. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and for your good wishes, dear suchess.
amada, my pen-pushing friend,
you're more than welcome.
God bless, take care and keep sharing!
the Duchess