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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Using only the eight syllables allowed, you have enthusiastically described a delightful sight. The personification of "light" was an excellent means of bringing the scene to life.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Using only the eight syllables allowed, you have enthusiastically described a delightful sight. The personification of "light" was an excellent means of bringing the scene to life.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from Vanna1
A fun little ditty! I like the dancing part. Good presentation. It is very hard to write something interesting in so few words, you did a really good job here.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A fun little ditty! I like the dancing part. Good presentation. It is very hard to write something interesting in so few words, you did a really good job here.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Great title. We who live on or near the water can appreciate the word picture you painted. The reflection of the sun off the water creates a beautiful light show. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Great title. We who live on or near the water can appreciate the word picture you painted. The reflection of the sun off the water creates a beautiful light show. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from roof35
You have penned an excellent entry for the one/six/one contest. Your illustration is beautiful, pairs perfectly, and sets the stage for your words. Your rhymed it just right. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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You have penned an excellent entry for the one/six/one contest. Your illustration is beautiful, pairs perfectly, and sets the stage for your words. Your rhymed it just right. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love it! You really took full advantage of the format. You share an image, a message, a moment with just a few words. I really enjoyed it. Image is perfect too!
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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I love it! You really took full advantage of the format. You share an image, a message, a moment with just a few words. I really enjoyed it. Image is perfect too!
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review it means so much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image is a great picture, Mystery Author. Your thoughts are well-described. However, your lines do not rhyme as per contest rules. I will return later to see if you have revised.
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Revisions made. Rating revised, too.
Would you consider 'bright' instead of right?
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Your image is a great picture, Mystery Author. Your thoughts are well-described. However, your lines do not rhyme as per contest rules. I will return later to see if you have revised.
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Revisions made. Rating revised, too.
Would you consider 'bright' instead of right?
Respectfully, Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your letting me know.
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Yes thank you so much for your input and the review.
