Renga Multi-Author Book
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Comment from royowen
You're doing ok, June, thank you for joining in this lovely poetic plan by Gypsy to present this renga contribution, beautifully written dear girl, it a great addition to this collaboration, well done, blessings, Roy
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You're doing ok, June, thank you for joining in this lovely poetic plan by Gypsy to present this renga contribution, beautifully written dear girl, it a great addition to this collaboration, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Roy! Always appreciate your insightful feedback.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent carry on, June. The soft glowing lights remind me not only of the ocean waves reflecting the setting sun, but also the warm ovens when the pots fill with soup welcoming the sailors back home.
Excellent addition to Gypsy's book and I look forward to what happens next. :)
Gloria
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Excellent carry on, June. The soft glowing lights remind me not only of the ocean waves reflecting the setting sun, but also the warm ovens when the pots fill with soup welcoming the sailors back home.
Excellent addition to Gypsy's book and I look forward to what happens next. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Gloria! Always appreciate your insightful feedback.