Sweet Innocent Child
a 5/7/5 poem for contest15 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a powerful poem. I think your poem and image go together very well. It's scary what you are showing here and I hope your poem does bring awareness to this situation. Your poem itself expresses so much with just three lines. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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This is a powerful poem. I think your poem and image go together very well. It's scary what you are showing here and I hope your poem does bring awareness to this situation. Your poem itself expresses so much with just three lines. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
You adhered to the contest rules and this entry is perfect for the 5-7-5 contest! Good luck on the win!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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You adhered to the contest rules and this entry is perfect for the 5-7-5 contest! Good luck on the win!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from gramalot8
Thank you for sharing your poem and information with everyone. It is a dreadful situation that occurs way too often and is realistically right under our noses. My family has supported this cause through OUR ( Operation Underground Railroad) here in Utah.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing your poem and information with everyone. It is a dreadful situation that occurs way too often and is realistically right under our noses. My family has supported this cause through OUR ( Operation Underground Railroad) here in Utah.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Thank you very much for your service to prevent this horrible crime.
Comment from RodG
Your 5-7-5 works on another level. I live in a Chicago where at least one "sweet innocent child" Is shot and killed--"gone in the dead of night"-- every weekend this summer. Rod
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Your 5-7-5 works on another level. I live in a Chicago where at least one "sweet innocent child" Is shot and killed--"gone in the dead of night"-- every weekend this summer. Rod
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Rod. I appreciate your review and feedback.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, not sure. This is a hard topic to speak of and to see it in a contest entry. I don't know. It as a whole reads as a public service announcement. Don't get me wrong. Human trafficking is horrible and needs to stopped. I wish there was some answer to keep it from happening, but how do we ultimately defeat evil. Good on you to put the hot line number in your notes. One never knows who sees a post or saw something around the world. Perhaps they'll remember this post and make a call or say something.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Hmm, not sure. This is a hard topic to speak of and to see it in a contest entry. I don't know. It as a whole reads as a public service announcement. Don't get me wrong. Human trafficking is horrible and needs to stopped. I wish there was some answer to keep it from happening, but how do we ultimately defeat evil. Good on you to put the hot line number in your notes. One never knows who sees a post or saw something around the world. Perhaps they'll remember this post and make a call or say something.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and feedback.