Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Well done! Glad to see you've joined the Renga caravan. This is a lovely couplet. Very colorful and imaginative addition to the book. Can't wait to see where this leads to.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much June, for these encouraging comments and a great review, blessings. Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh, I'm so glad you added your contribution to Gypsy's book, Roy! I love it! The picture is gorgeous and you described this desert dust storm and it made me think of auroras, too!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much Helen, for these encouraging comments and a great review, blessings. Roy

Comment from Marjon van Bruggen

Excellent

beautiful, Roy. The image is magnificent and makes a very good haiku. I think I have a good 7-7 to follow this up. Let me see if I can get it posted.
I was surprised to see you here too. You amaze me.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much Marjon, for these marvellous comments and a super review, looking forward to you 7/7, blessings Roy

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 19-Jul-2020

It's there already. Welcome to my review.

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

I?ve read it

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 20-Jul-2020

And you had a marvelous reaction! Thanks.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Roy, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for your chapter of the book. You used beautiful imagery and very beautiful words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much Teri, for these marvellous comments and a super review Teri, blessings Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is one of the best haiku I have read, Roy. What an amazing description paired with an equally amazing image. Your words are descriptive, precise, and so enjoyable to read. Though your image is beautiful, your words paint their own picture. too. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much Jan, for these marvellous comments and a super review Teri, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You described that photographic perfectly. Not sure which came first the artwork or the poem. Either way, it was a joy to read. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much Barbara, for these marvellous comments and a super review Teri, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Great short verse offering for the book, dear Roy. A frosted winterscape you painted here with your words. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for your book endeavors.
Sal xo

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 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much Sally, for these marvellous comments and a super review Teri, blessings Roy

Comment from H. Darwin Reeves

Excellent

Very nice. You've described the sparkle of dust particles that reflect the sunlight. A nice description and easily visualized. I like the choice of "panoramic gems" to describe the sensation. Thanks for posting.

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 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a super review Teri, blessings Roy