Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Whirlwind Whistles"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written poem - chapter for your book. I wish I could concentrate enough to do one, but it's kind of hard for me. I enjoy reading yours and reviewing them. Maybe one day I will do that too. love, teri
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written poem - chapter for your book. I wish I could concentrate enough to do one, but it's kind of hard for me. I enjoy reading yours and reviewing them. Maybe one day I will do that too. love, teri
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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No worries, the book is going to be around for a long time.
Thank you very much, Teri. You are always very encouraging and kind. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day or night.
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Gypsy, I love this race, the mysteries in the world abroad make this a fascinating exercise in a sort developmental circle well done, Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Beautifully written Gypsy, I love this race, the mysteries in the world abroad make this a fascinating exercise in a sort developmental circle well done, Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy. You are always very encouraging and kind. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day or night.
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You too Gypsy,
Comment from rama devi
Wonderful work with all the W sounds in line one, making it somehow SOUND like a whirlwind! Great imagery. Love the striking photo! Mount Fuji. Yes! No nits. wonderful what will unfold in the next renga! Fun project.
Warmly, rd
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Wonderful work with all the W sounds in line one, making it somehow SOUND like a whirlwind! Great imagery. Love the striking photo! Mount Fuji. Yes! No nits. wonderful what will unfold in the next renga! Fun project.
Warmly, rd
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Rama Devi. You are always very encouraging and kind. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day or night.
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Thank you, dear. I appreciate your kindness too!
Warm Smiles,
rd
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for continuing the book that you started, Gypsy! I like how you added to the winter scene from Rama's poem to bring us to a specific geographic location. You've gotten lots of participation. Does it have to go until 100 entries?
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for continuing the book that you started, Gypsy! I like how you added to the winter scene from Rama's poem to bring us to a specific geographic location. You've gotten lots of participation. Does it have to go until 100 entries?
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Ithank you, Helen, the renga will go to 184 verses total and then we can start a new one, if we want to. Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Have a wonderful day.