Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "First Breath"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Edward Escobar
The above verse was warm worded with warmth and a bit of frost to equally match the going and coming of two seasons blended perfectly together as one. I am smiling for that very reason.
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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The above verse was warm worded with warmth and a bit of frost to equally match the going and coming of two seasons blended perfectly together as one. I am smiling for that very reason.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a gorgeous presentation, June. I love the art choice and your excellent word choices. I can see this beautiful scene although it is over 100* here now [Tuesday it was 111* ]. You did a great job with the style of haiku.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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This is a gorgeous presentation, June. I love the art choice and your excellent word choices. I can see this beautiful scene although it is over 100* here now [Tuesday it was 111* ]. You did a great job with the style of haiku.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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I am thoroughly enjoying this Renga collection - keeps my mind off the heat. Not as bad as where you are, but hot for New England. Thank you for reading and reviewing!