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Behold, and then Be

Take comfort in His path for us.

30 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a vividly descriptive, creatively composed, and profoundly inspirational poem that points to the Lord and His will that we be a light in the world.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


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    Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from June Sargent
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What an uplifting and insightful piece you have created during these turbulent times. If only we would learn from the example of Christ who suffered more than any of us can imagine. Thank you fir reminding us to Dudu faithful and humble.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


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    Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from UpNorth
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Well written seasonal stanzas incorporating easily identified truths of a Christian believer. I read it to the end because of your skill with the craft and your images.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Clockwise!
What a beautifully rendered poetic offering of belief and faith. I appreciate not only the message but also the format of your offering. Likewise, I so appreciate how you make the connections between God and earth, nature, and sky...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, spiritual and creative.
I found this poem to be reassuring. The last stanza speaks volumes!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the words
of this poem.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Aussie
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Is it "remove the plank from your eye, then the beam from your brother's?" I liked the way you set this out, so easy to read. We who worship Him understand what He has done for us. Those with blinders on...see nothing of His beauty.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Yes! The NIV calls it a plank instead of a beam. Thank you for your time and kind review.
reply by Aussie on 18-Jul-2020
    You are most welcome, have a good night? It is 10.30 am here!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Clockwise, this is an absolutely beautiful statement of faith enfolded in an illustration of a simple, single flower.
How great a voice you are asking the rest of us to be His voice and witness, when the world starts asking "why?"

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from amada
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Tender and beautiful poem you wrote here. Yesterday I was privileged o experience something of what you write about. I was in the years picking weeds early in the morning, suddenly the sun shone on it, and the weed became a flower...Marveloujs experience, someday I might write about it.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your time and kind. I am honored that you decided to bookmark it. Thanks!
Comment from royowen
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I love those scriptures where God reaches Down a comforting hand, and His ever diligent eye searching for those that want to serve Him, never forgetting the searching heart, the wondering and wandering pilgrim, well done. Beautifully written in articulate free verse, Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


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    Thank you for your time and kind review.
reply by royowen on 18-Jul-2020
    Most welcome
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
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Wow! Our biggest problem with your poem is that we don't have a 6 тн? review to give. The poem is absolutely beautiful and very elegant. The picture accompanying this poem is perfect and helps with the overall presentation. The rhyming is excellent and the syllable count is very consistent. Have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your time and kind review.