Clue
Murder solved33 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Yes! We love to play Clue and other games. But Clue is a favorite with my girls. My youngest son loves the movie. Murder is always a good topic for a flash fiction. :P
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Yes! We love to play Clue and other games. But Clue is a favorite with my girls. My youngest son loves the movie. Murder is always a good topic for a flash fiction. :P
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. Yes, my large family loves board games, and Clue is always at the top. Scrabble, too. ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Ah! Well done! I LOVE that game! I haven't played it in years, but am sure Keven has the game here in a closet. Now I have to drag that out and make him play. FUNNY! Maybe you will inspire me to try some of these short writes (maybe not!) and who knows what might come out???
Hilarious you put on a warning for violence! :)
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Ah! Well done! I LOVE that game! I haven't played it in years, but am sure Keven has the game here in a closet. Now I have to drag that out and make him play. FUNNY! Maybe you will inspire me to try some of these short writes (maybe not!) and who knows what might come out???
Hilarious you put on a warning for violence! :)
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review. You're so kind. I thought this up after playing board games for an entire day with my grandchildren. We love games but had been apart for so long, we had a game marathon. I'm pleased you enjoyed this and the violence warning.... (You're the only one who got it.) ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxoxo
Comment from fm wright
A wonderful and creative take on the game of Clue. I really like how you molded a piece of flash fiction out of a board game. My best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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A wonderful and creative take on the game of Clue. I really like how you molded a piece of flash fiction out of a board game. My best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Faye dear, thank you so much for the kind review of this silly flash fiction. I couldn't sleep one night and thought this up. Is this crazy or what? I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thought it six worthy. I really appreciate your kind attention to my work.
Sending my best today as always,
Sally XOs".................
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I thoroughly enjoyed it. Having played the board game I really appreciate how you made the characters come to life in a believable story that fit right in with the game itself.
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Aw, thank you, Faye dear. Xoxo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I just watched the movie and it was so willy nilly that this piece fit perfectly with it. I loved the confusion you recreated in this piece to match the one i felt watching it. Perfectly done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I just watched the movie and it was so willy nilly that this piece fit perfectly with it. I loved the confusion you recreated in this piece to match the one i felt watching it. Perfectly done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review of my work, dear Barb. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Sending my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I remember playing Clue with my kids. It's a fun game and all those characters were interesting. It probably is a good mental exercise, too. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Lol! I remember playing Clue with my kids. It's a fun game and all those characters were interesting. It probably is a good mental exercise, too. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments for my flash fiction entry. It is a fun game and I've played it a lot with my grandchildren.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightfully witty! I well remember the game--clever play with Peacock's feathers ruffled and amusing punchline. You may have a winner--good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Congrats on your recognition--as I'd hoped.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Delightfully witty! I well remember the game--clever play with Peacock's feathers ruffled and amusing punchline. You may have a winner--good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Congrats on your recognition--as I'd hoped.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I hope so, but who knows. I did have a lot of fun with this one anyway. Thanks for the well wishes and kind comments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Realist101
Hi there Sally! I love the twist, it's how to do flash.
It's hard to do a whole story in so few words!
Very enjoyable and I wish you the best in the contest too!
Susan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hi there Sally! I love the twist, it's how to do flash.
It's hard to do a whole story in so few words!
Very enjoyable and I wish you the best in the contest too!
Susan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Good afternoon, Susan. I'm glad to see you're back with us here on FanStory and so glad to read this review! Thanks so much for the kind words and compliments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, Sally, I'm remember the game of Clue well. I enjoyed your contest entry. You did a great job with a complete story in 75 words. I like the presentation--the font, the font size, the image, the added bonus of the video.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Yes, Sally, I'm remember the game of Clue well. I enjoyed your contest entry. You did a great job with a complete story in 75 words. I like the presentation--the font, the font size, the image, the added bonus of the video.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much dear Jan. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I had a lot of fun writing this after playing the game endlessly with my grandkids. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
Well, that explains everything! I liked your reinforcing illustration about a crime and victorian era ambiance. Best wishes in the Flash competition- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Well, that explains everything! I liked your reinforcing illustration about a crime and victorian era ambiance. Best wishes in the Flash competition- Joan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Joan. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my spoof. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, I liked how well this is written, but the I'm afraid the whole pun is lost on me. Non of your fault, but I've never heard about a famous board game called Clue. I grew up in Denmark. And never came across it in all the countries I've lived in ever since. What a shame. I'll have to look it up. All best. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hi Sally, I liked how well this is written, but the I'm afraid the whole pun is lost on me. Non of your fault, but I've never heard about a famous board game called Clue. I grew up in Denmark. And never came across it in all the countries I've lived in ever since. What a shame. I'll have to look it up. All best. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for the excellent review of my silly piece. I had fun with it.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Ulla.
Sal xoxo