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a drink to die for14 total reviews
Comment from Crystal Noble
Very interesting post, I really enjoyed reading it.
thx for sharing! Life could be so simple but we make it hard.
Be humble and listen to the voice and guidance of god.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Very interesting post, I really enjoyed reading it.
thx for sharing! Life could be so simple but we make it hard.
Be humble and listen to the voice and guidance of god.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much Crystal:)
Comment from Alchera
"I, Geronimo the Clown; I made fun of my family, and my chance to have a good and honest life. I got caught in the web of lies and deceit."
I do like Geronimo and all his suffering background behind his mask. A clown's life is really not easy to survive due to the fact that is job is to make people laugh at any show because The show must go on... Poor Clown and what about when he is in a sad, horrible, and lonely period of his life? I did appreciate it all Iza, and for this reason, I'll give you two titles of your future work and new novel: Behind My Laughing Mask or Within a Vodka Bottle. Geronimo could become your next novel. Great Work! This came out while I am writing and listening to "Torna a Surriento." Blessings.Tony
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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"I, Geronimo the Clown; I made fun of my family, and my chance to have a good and honest life. I got caught in the web of lies and deceit."
I do like Geronimo and all his suffering background behind his mask. A clown's life is really not easy to survive due to the fact that is job is to make people laugh at any show because The show must go on... Poor Clown and what about when he is in a sad, horrible, and lonely period of his life? I did appreciate it all Iza, and for this reason, I'll give you two titles of your future work and new novel: Behind My Laughing Mask or Within a Vodka Bottle. Geronimo could become your next novel. Great Work! This came out while I am writing and listening to "Torna a Surriento." Blessings.Tony
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Do you translate this with Give me a smile? And thanks for the suggestion, that could become a book:) you will see, where my inspiration gets me:) Have a blessed day
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Give me a smile? I will, creating
something about it. Have a fine day!Tony
Comment from Vanna1
This is a good piece full of satire, sadness, and exasperation. You have two different spellings to his name. - God sad lets you go-? You need some punctuation before ungrateful. The presentation is good too.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This is a good piece full of satire, sadness, and exasperation. You have two different spellings to his name. - God sad lets you go-? You need some punctuation before ungrateful. The presentation is good too.
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your suggestions and for your awesome review.
Comment from lancellot
Okay, this is hard to review as it was to read and fully understand. I am not sure the words are misspelled because the character dying, drunk or poisoned. Some parts are spelled and written correctly, and some aren't. I hoping their would a message warning us in the notes but there isn't. So, how are supposed to know?
Example:
But God sad lets you go.
I suggest you warn the readers in the notes, that the spellings and poor composition is for realism.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Okay, this is hard to review as it was to read and fully understand. I am not sure the words are misspelled because the character dying, drunk or poisoned. Some parts are spelled and written correctly, and some aren't. I hoping their would a message warning us in the notes but there isn't. So, how are supposed to know?
Example:
But God sad lets you go.
I suggest you warn the readers in the notes, that the spellings and poor composition is for realism.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your honest review:)
