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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun little scenario with a great picture to support your well-chosen words. I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. Great work with the prompt. Your syllable count is correct and the formatting is great. I agree about weather at times. It's not raining here until the rain hits the ground--and then that isn't often enough. However, the weather maps make us look like an oasis in the desert--not! Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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What a fun little scenario with a great picture to support your well-chosen words. I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. Great work with the prompt. Your syllable count is correct and the formatting is great. I agree about weather at times. It's not raining here until the rain hits the ground--and then that isn't often enough. However, the weather maps make us look like an oasis in the desert--not! Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review Jan. Glad you enjoyed.