Curiosity killed the cat
knock, knock15 total reviews
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha, I hadn't imagined lady Carona with bat wings, but that makes sense as the virus alledgedly comes from bats. Poor misguided snowflake, but hey shizen happens. Great entry and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Ha, ha, I hadn't imagined lady Carona with bat wings, but that makes sense as the virus alledgedly comes from bats. Poor misguided snowflake, but hey shizen happens. Great entry and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this story promotes the proverb and shows in action as telling less, interesting and somewhat mystic and funny; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
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I like this story promotes the proverb and shows in action as telling less, interesting and somewhat mystic and funny; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
Comment from tfawcus
Some amusing puns in this, with the double meaning of 'corona' and 'gives you wings'. It sounds as though this poor student is about to meet his Maker. Of course, I could be wrong. Maybe it's just a load of bull!
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Some amusing puns in this, with the double meaning of 'corona' and 'gives you wings'. It sounds as though this poor student is about to meet his Maker. Of course, I could be wrong. Maybe it's just a load of bull!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Author you kind of left me hanging with the title and connecting it to the contents. I do see that you and them red bulls have a love Affair. And I myself dropped out of the University because of not having that one on one with professor. And the classroom participation. By the way were you aware that the original red bulls contained cocaine up to a few years ago. google it.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Author you kind of left me hanging with the title and connecting it to the contents. I do see that you and them red bulls have a love Affair. And I myself dropped out of the University because of not having that one on one with professor. And the classroom participation. By the way were you aware that the original red bulls contained cocaine up to a few years ago. google it.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Wow, I didn't know. We had no energizers in the county I come from. To tell you I prefer NOS instead of Red Bull:) Thank you for your wonderful review and for sharing with me the secret ingredient of Red Bull.
Comment from humpwhistle
Hmmm. Red Bull seems to be as potent as some of the best acid I ever dropped. Who knew? Paranoia much?
Best of luck,
Lee
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ordered to not to --One too many to's.
put a video--is there a word missing here?
offence?
is a trap--It's a trap?
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Hmmm. Red Bull seems to be as potent as some of the best acid I ever dropped. Who knew? Paranoia much?
Best of luck,
Lee
me check, my memory.--is this comma necessary?
ordered to not to --One too many to's.
put a video--is there a word missing here?
offence?
is a trap--It's a trap?
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2020