Traffic
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Plan"With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this continuation progression of the story to the next phase with further discovery in the house; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I like this continuation progression of the story to the next phase with further discovery in the house; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your supportive review. I'm glad it is doing what I want it to.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice escape story, when you team up you can change the faith of the world. Thank you for sharing and I hope the girls we'll made safe back to the normal world, away from the human trafficking.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Nice escape story, when you team up you can change the faith of the world. Thank you for sharing and I hope the girls we'll made safe back to the normal world, away from the human trafficking.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your supportive review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.