The Inn at Blackpool
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Bootsie and Nigel"These are free-verse poems.
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Comment from Earl Corp
I thought Bootsie hit Nigel with a brick for dancing with another girl, boy did I get that wrong. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and made me laugh. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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I thought Bootsie hit Nigel with a brick for dancing with another girl, boy did I get that wrong. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and made me laugh. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thanks so very much....Godspeed and Best Wishes.....Stu Harrell
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write Stuart and dancing at home can be hazardous it seems. I hope you soon start dancing in the studio instead, I enjoyed the language here, a well presented poem, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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This is a fun write Stuart and dancing at home can be hazardous it seems. I hope you soon start dancing in the studio instead, I enjoyed the language here, a well presented poem, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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You are right....I was practicing at home away from my partner actually to hopefully surprise her later at the studio with my many nuances....Thanks for your kind thoughts and Godspeed....Stu Harrell