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Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Sad Awakening, opens and closes with the dream scenario. The "I Have a Dream' speech works into the sense of loss, really, that all the advances of sixty years are flushed away. Perhaps a return to sleeping can allow the dream to return. Powerful story.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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This story, Sad Awakening, opens and closes with the dream scenario. The "I Have a Dream' speech works into the sense of loss, really, that all the advances of sixty years are flushed away. Perhaps a return to sleeping can allow the dream to return. Powerful story.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Bill thank you, I am certain Dr King is simply shocked...
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed reading this. You express a lot here and your words are full of caring and love for everyone, something that's is a bit rare these days. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed reading this. You express a lot here and your words are full of caring and love for everyone, something that's is a bit rare these days. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Oliver, thank you!
Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU
Am impressed by the elaborate explaination of the current affairs in Usa and the predicted hopes and aspirations of long gone leaders.
well done and good luck
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Am impressed by the elaborate explaination of the current affairs in Usa and the predicted hopes and aspirations of long gone leaders.
well done and good luck
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Chanyas, please let me know your country, I am so grateful for you and your participation in FanStory. You write quite well.