Back from the Past
It's not just us who cannot leave well enough alone...15 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
It was labeled "human". Perfect placement of this very important clue to understanding this bit of mystery writing. You are so clever! Love the name scramble as well.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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It was labeled "human". Perfect placement of this very important clue to understanding this bit of mystery writing. You are so clever! Love the name scramble as well.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Margaret, thank you so much! A 6-star is always something to smile about, but twice so when it comes from you. I'm blown away and honored. I'm glad you enjoyed! The 'name scramble' had me worried. Too much left off or out and no one would connect it, even with author notes. Tooo much left in and it would let the cat out of the bag ? or the bug out of the box ? too soon :)
Thank you again. Blessings,
Deb
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You deserved the six for the unique story line!
Comment from Puzzle
HOLY CREATIVE!!!! I BOW TO THE MASTER! Fantastic twist! I DID NOT see that coming. So awesome! I need to write my detective story!!! lol. I'm excited about it. I hope you win cause u deserve to!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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HOLY CREATIVE!!!! I BOW TO THE MASTER! Fantastic twist! I DID NOT see that coming. So awesome! I need to write my detective story!!! lol. I'm excited about it. I hope you win cause u deserve to!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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I"m blown away that you gave me the six stars, Dana! And I need to go read that post ? I got it up at almost 2 AM and am actually not sure how I ended it! Shhhh ? don't tell! lol. I was going to put what virus each name came from and was so wiped out that I forgot what webpage I got them from. lol.
HOe your day is grand -- only 8 more school days and Y'all are done! (Just to make you COMPLETELY jealous -- we ended on May 26 ? just sayin' ? I was SO glad when that was done!)
Talk later,
Deb
Comment from royowen
This is really different, and very good, everything is looking through the eight eyes of another species, that could well be me. I loved it, great and strange protagonists, and a strange slightly angry antagonist, in the the saddle, or rather in the house. This is an excellent post Debora, while done, blessings, Roy
Typo : And the (best) stood, roaring its fury. Beast?
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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This is really different, and very good, everything is looking through the eight eyes of another species, that could well be me. I loved it, great and strange protagonists, and a strange slightly angry antagonist, in the the saddle, or rather in the house. This is an excellent post Debora, while done, blessings, Roy
Typo : And the (best) stood, roaring its fury. Beast?
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Thank you Roy! I apprecate you reading and catching the typo! Yep, 'beast' it was ? or will be in a minute!
Be blessed this beautiful day,
Deb
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Well done
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this funny story, this promotes how things affect our lives and we never know before the effect we bear; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Good luck. ALCREATOR
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I like this funny story, this promotes how things affect our lives and we never know before the effect we bear; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Good luck. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Hi Alcreator! Thanks for reading and for your kind and encouraging words!
Be blessed this fine day,
Deb
Comment from humpwhistle
This reminded me of those cheesy Japanese monster films of the fifties and sixties--Godzilla, Rodan--but in a camp kind of way. I didn't catch on to the names, they just seemed foreign to me. Very witty, and creative. Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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This reminded me of those cheesy Japanese monster films of the fifties and sixties--Godzilla, Rodan--but in a camp kind of way. I didn't catch on to the names, they just seemed foreign to me. Very witty, and creative. Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate those kind words. I thought it was kind of B-movie-ish, too. I enjoyed writing it and am glad you got a kick out of it.
Be blessed this fine day!
Deb