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Comment from Mistydawn
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Lol. I can so relate. For some reason my oldest seems to think she's my favorite of course the others disagree. One day my youngest daughter said I know you just let her think that to make her feel better about herself, but you and I know who your real favorite is. I tell them they're all my favorite then mumble PIA's. They'll say we heard that mom and laugh. My oldest is 35 youngest 27.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    They?ve been at it like this for twenty years.
Comment from Spitfire
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A matter of semantics. Reminds me of that riddle--which comes first--the chicken or the egg? Personally, I think 'adore' wins. But Mom is smart. A fun story about sibling rivalry.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    They?re at it all the time.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Oy, all mother's should have such difficult decisions to make. Myrtle Goldbloom's offspring act like they don't even have a mother!
My sister and I used to flatter my Mom in a similar way. But it was more in the vane of Tommy and Dickie Smothers.

Best of luck in the competition, Bill.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    This stuck in my mind and is just one of many one-ups they have been involved in. I no longer know if their insecurity is feigned or genuine. I?m chopped liver no matter what.
Comment from JudyE
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Kids!! They never really grow up, do they? And parents never really stop worrying about them either. Our 'boys', both in their 40s, have, since the pandemic hit, become very concerned about us. Not that they weren't before but it's more apparent now. Good luck if the contest hasn't already been.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Judy. Those kids love their mother to pieces.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Bill, get two kids and what do you get. A "top this" conversation like the one posted here.

What a Very True Story this is!

God, please help the parents who have three or four children, to keep their affection and eliminate the strife.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Suzanna.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. That's so hard on moms when there is still that vying for mother's affection. Of course, she loves them both. A cute story everyone can relate to. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    Thank you, lyenochka.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-A good story to go with it.
-I like how each card had
the same signature.
-You have a way with making
things humorous with
30 somethings vying for their
mother's attention.
-Of course, I wonder if they
know they are written about?
-The conversation is very good.
-Thanks for sharing it, and
good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Pam
reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Jun-2020
    You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Hello there, Bill. Lol, what a great story. It's so funny how all siblings are competitive on being mom's favorite lol. Cute story. - Kerry

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Kerry.
reply by Kerry Foley on 01-Jun-2020
    Welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, what a fun contest entry--fun in the way you wrote it. I can see this happening as I read it. Sibling rivalry--what would they do without it? Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Jan.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Gosh, what a complicated network of relationships binds your family together. I would bang the kids' heads together and tell them to pull as one.
I am 61 and my baby brother died aged 52 (I still have my second brother). My parents have never been the same since our loss and really need their remaining children to be united. If we fought, especially if it involved them, they would be devastated. Life is too short. Enjoy your children and help them to enjoy you, while you all can.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    They don?t fight; they?re just competitive for their mom?s approval. I?m choppedliver.
reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 01-Jun-2020
    You, I feel sorry for. I maintain that your wife will find this harder as she grows older, unless they stop (but this seems unlikely).