Memory Lane
A Free Verse poem...39 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Interesting poem it is entertaining and unique. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Interesting poem it is entertaining and unique. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you for taking time to journey with me! Always appreciate your kind words! xoxo
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Where would we be without our memories? - For these are the stories of our lives stored away in the computer we call our brain. Reflecting on the good and bad times are something we seniors do as we age, I think of it as watching my favorite movie, over and over again. I can relate to your trip down memory lane. Thank you for sharing this work and thank you for your service.
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Where would we be without our memories? - For these are the stories of our lives stored away in the computer we call our brain. Reflecting on the good and bad times are something we seniors do as we age, I think of it as watching my favorite movie, over and over again. I can relate to your trip down memory lane. Thank you for sharing this work and thank you for your service.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Yes, exactly! Like a movie! Thank you for taking this journey with me! xoxo
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this well written free verse about traveling down memory lane during different stages of life. Thanks for sharing some specific glimpses into your life. Bill
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I like this well written free verse about traveling down memory lane during different stages of life. Thanks for sharing some specific glimpses into your life. Bill
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you, Bill for taking the journey with me! Your precious feedback is appreciated! xoxo
Comment from Willosa
Your poem about memories is lovely. With much time on our hands in the current scheme of things I find memories keeping me company much more lately. I like the autobiographical theme, just within a short poem it tells us quite a bit about you. Hope there are many more happy memories for you to add to your diary. Lesley.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Your poem about memories is lovely. With much time on our hands in the current scheme of things I find memories keeping me company much more lately. I like the autobiographical theme, just within a short poem it tells us quite a bit about you. Hope there are many more happy memories for you to add to your diary. Lesley.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much for taking time to enjoy and offering your prdcious feedback! xoxo
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, beautiful, interesting and creative.
Listening to the music as I write - perfect choice. The words of this
poem were descriptive, emotional and made me think of my own
memories. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
A well written poem! Hope you are doing well.....Maria
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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The author's words are heartfelt, beautiful, interesting and creative.
Listening to the music as I write - perfect choice. The words of this
poem were descriptive, emotional and made me think of my own
memories. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
A well written poem! Hope you are doing well.....Maria
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and appreciate! Have a blessed week ahead! xoxo
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written my friend, it's funny I just wrote a poem about my childhood, it seems that "memory lane" is the theme. I loved this post, it spoke to, and revived my thoughts of childhood, and into youth and beyond, well done such lovely, But sometimes sad memories, but they all form a rich tapestry of existence, well done Diana, blessings Roy
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Beautifully written my friend, it's funny I just wrote a poem about my childhood, it seems that "memory lane" is the theme. I loved this post, it spoke to, and revived my thoughts of childhood, and into youth and beyond, well done such lovely, But sometimes sad memories, but they all form a rich tapestry of existence, well done Diana, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Yes, and yours was wonderful! We must be on a bit of the same wavelength! Haha! xoxo
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Good job
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed the illustration equating "memory" with a "journal". I enjoyed your free verse and traveling with you through your past life. Your final "umbrella" metaphor is quite evocative. Cheers- Joan
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I enjoyed the illustration equating "memory" with a "journal". I enjoyed your free verse and traveling with you through your past life. Your final "umbrella" metaphor is quite evocative. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much! Greatly appreciate you took this journey with me! xoxo
Comment from judiverse
Wonderful memories, and it's always good to look back and reflect on the past. I have fond memories of my grandfather, too. (My maternal grandfather, that is. Not so much so my father's side of the family.) If you served in the WACs, that must have taken any hippie that remained out of you. Isn't corp spelled corps? I like your concluding thought that your memories are like an umbrella on a rainy day. They are nice to have. Excellent choice for the artwork. judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Wonderful memories, and it's always good to look back and reflect on the past. I have fond memories of my grandfather, too. (My maternal grandfather, that is. Not so much so my father's side of the family.) If you served in the WACs, that must have taken any hippie that remained out of you. Isn't corp spelled corps? I like your concluding thought that your memories are like an umbrella on a rainy day. They are nice to have. Excellent choice for the artwork. judi
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you and yes, I?ll go add my ?s? lol! Appreciate your precious feedback and for stopping to take the journey with me! xoxo
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I just absolutely love the line you conclude on there -- those memories are a wonderful umbrella again teary and cloudy days, aren't they?! ;) A beautiful free verse offering for the day, my lady ... thanx for the watery smile! ;) Yvette
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Oh, I just absolutely love the line you conclude on there -- those memories are a wonderful umbrella again teary and cloudy days, aren't they?! ;) A beautiful free verse offering for the day, my lady ... thanx for the watery smile! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Yes, they are! all about changing a thought and good memories can do the trick!! Glad you enjoyed this and thanks for taking the journey with me! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Memory Lane, carries a lot of good times and from the nearest happenings back to the times when life was new every day and everyone loved us. Nice stroll.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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This free verse, Memory Lane, carries a lot of good times and from the nearest happenings back to the times when life was new every day and everyone loved us. Nice stroll.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much! xoxoxo
