Jesus Returns
a contest entry27 total reviews
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
He can't come soon enough. The world is so hungry for His presence. I appreciated your poem and your statement of faith. I am watchful and I am doing a lot of praying.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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He can't come soon enough. The world is so hungry for His presence. I appreciated your poem and your statement of faith. I am watchful and I am doing a lot of praying.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Bill Pinder
I liked this 575 contest entry about the return of Christ riding a white horse prophesied in revelation. Thanks for sharing this truth in a creative way and including the Scriptures at the bottom. Bill
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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I liked this 575 contest entry about the return of Christ riding a white horse prophesied in revelation. Thanks for sharing this truth in a creative way and including the Scriptures at the bottom. Bill
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Bill,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments , they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Jesus Returns", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this is definitely a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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"Jesus Returns", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this is definitely a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Duchess,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Hugs...Portia
Portia,
you deserved both. You have a wonderful weekend too.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Cindy Decker
Hi, Portia. Beautiful picture and perfect 5-7-5 syllable poem. I also like your write up of revelation. I tell you a secret: sometimes I worry Heaven is spectacular and too fast and full of power that I will not be able to keep up. I hope there is sleep in Heaven, Portia, because, sleep is my comfort here on Earth when I am battling depression.
Excellent poem and write up Portia.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Hi, Portia. Beautiful picture and perfect 5-7-5 syllable poem. I also like your write up of revelation. I tell you a secret: sometimes I worry Heaven is spectacular and too fast and full of power that I will not be able to keep up. I hope there is sleep in Heaven, Portia, because, sleep is my comfort here on Earth when I am battling depression.
Excellent poem and write up Portia.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Hello My Friend,
Thanks so much for your review and comments. Cindy, you will no longer have any worries nor depression. God will wash away all of our tears and praise God, there will be no more sickness.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Margaret Bednar
This meets the criteria for the 5-7-5 challenge and I do like it.
But if you wanted to sum up the paragraph in Rev 19-11 you could end it with "be faithful and true". Just playing, it isn't a critique.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This meets the criteria for the 5-7-5 challenge and I do like it.
But if you wanted to sum up the paragraph in Rev 19-11 you could end it with "be faithful and true". Just playing, it isn't a critique.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Margaret,
Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
I like really like your view point..."be faithful and true," you are correct because it indeed sums it all up. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, pharp. Great job with its presentation--the image is super, the color scheme works, your syllable count is correct per line, and your message is clear and true. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, pharp. Great job with its presentation--the image is super, the color scheme works, your syllable count is correct per line, and your message is clear and true. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Jan,
Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from royowen
My friend and I were sharing communion and praying early this morning, and we were taking about this season, and opened our thoughts to revelation, and the imminent return of Jesus, so well done. Great revelation Portia, well done blessing, Roy
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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My friend and I were sharing communion and praying early this morning, and we were taking about this season, and opened our thoughts to revelation, and the imminent return of Jesus, so well done. Great revelation Portia, well done blessing, Roy
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Roy,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
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Welcome Portia
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, have a message and are creative. Thank
you for the author's notes. As I read the quotes they were so meaningful
and complimented this poem well. The artwork is perfect and goes
well with the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you are doing well.....Maria
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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The author's words are clear, have a message and are creative. Thank
you for the author's notes. As I read the quotes they were so meaningful
and complimented this poem well. The artwork is perfect and goes
well with the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you are doing well.....Maria
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Maria,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about a vision that Jesus is riding on a white horse when he returns to us and bring us glory. We should be watching and keep praying for that day to come soon.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about a vision that Jesus is riding on a white horse when he returns to us and bring us glory. We should be watching and keep praying for that day to come soon.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Sandra,
Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Have a wonderful and blessed day. Stay safe and well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
My friend and child of God, this is a lovely acrostic poem with a true message. Our Savior, Christ Jesus will return for His children one day. The Book of Revelation is all about the battle of Armageddon and the four horsemen of the apocalypse. And, thank you for the reference Biblical scriptures. As you stated, we must be watchful and pray until Jesus returns. Beautiful message, Portia. Also, I like your imagery. Well-done. Stay safe. Happy writingð??? I wish I had a 6.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Hello,
My friend and child of God, this is a lovely acrostic poem with a true message. Our Savior, Christ Jesus will return for His children one day. The Book of Revelation is all about the battle of Armageddon and the four horsemen of the apocalypse. And, thank you for the reference Biblical scriptures. As you stated, we must be watchful and pray until Jesus returns. Beautiful message, Portia. Also, I like your imagery. Well-done. Stay safe. Happy writingð??? I wish I had a 6.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Joyce,
My dear sister, thank so much for your review and very kind comments. Have a wonderful and blessed day and may God continue to keep you and your family in His loving care.
Hugs...Portia
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You are welcome, love:-)