Brilliant Rainbow
Inspired by hearing of a rainbow.16 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The rainbow is a beautiful thing to behold. Your poem is well-written and uplifting, describing a rainbow vivid enough for all of the colors to be visible.
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The rainbow is a beautiful thing to behold. Your poem is well-written and uplifting, describing a rainbow vivid enough for all of the colors to be visible.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Kate Layne
Rainbows are so beautiful as you described. Like a gift from a storm that lights up the sky. It's one of the most fun things to see. I like how both kids and adults appreciate its beauty. Good job.
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Rainbows are so beautiful as you described. Like a gift from a storm that lights up the sky. It's one of the most fun things to see. I like how both kids and adults appreciate its beauty. Good job.
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Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I loved this poem, but you put all the colors of the rainbow in order in the poem and mixed up indigo and violet. I would fix it so they're all in order if it were my poem. It wouldn't throw off the rhythm or anything at all either. Fantastic poem either way.
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I loved this poem, but you put all the colors of the rainbow in order in the poem and mixed up indigo and violet. I would fix it so they're all in order if it were my poem. It wouldn't throw off the rhythm or anything at all either. Fantastic poem either way.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Irish Rain
Isn't that beautiful!
I love rainbows, and their promise.
This is a lovely poem Miss Patricia.
The picture is awesome.
Blessings...
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Isn't that beautiful!
I love rainbows, and their promise.
This is a lovely poem Miss Patricia.
The picture is awesome.
Blessings...
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from BethShelby
I love rainbows and this is brilliant one. It almost looks surreal. I ejoyed your poem. I see you used the some color scheme for you background and type as before. It very nice.
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I love rainbows and this is brilliant one. It almost looks surreal. I ejoyed your poem. I see you used the some color scheme for you background and type as before. It very nice.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your rainbow poem is inspiring, Patricia. You did a great job describing the beautiful rainbow. Your words flow smoothly with good info. It is one of God's treasures. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your rainbow poem is inspiring, Patricia. You did a great job describing the beautiful rainbow. Your words flow smoothly with good info. It is one of God's treasures. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.