Matt and Jiffy Join the Army 9
a one scene script with Matt and Jiffy15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Matt and Jiffy are going to learn what army life is really like now!! What a couple of plonkers they are. I think they should have checked up what army life is all about. I can't wait to read how they get on in Happy Valley. LOL. Well done, Bill, I enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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LOL! Matt and Jiffy are going to learn what army life is really like now!! What a couple of plonkers they are. I think they should have checked up what army life is all about. I can't wait to read how they get on in Happy Valley. LOL. Well done, Bill, I enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Matt and Jiffy are actually more typical of recruits than one might gather. Instant obeying of commands is antithetical to most people.
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Yes, you're right there. I think i'd struggle, too. I'm sure it doesn't take long to learn, though. :))
Comment from Mistydawn
Maybe a little hard labor will take their sarcasm down a notch. If not I'm sure the sergeant can find plenty more for them to do. Nothing like learning the hard way I guess, lol. Your script is well-written, interesting, believable as always.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Maybe a little hard labor will take their sarcasm down a notch. If not I'm sure the sergeant can find plenty more for them to do. Nothing like learning the hard way I guess, lol. Your script is well-written, interesting, believable as always.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you, MD. Matt and Jiffy need to bend a bit.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, I know you were in the marines, which of these characters were you when you first went in?
Was their really a character like jiffy?( Sounds like a character disorder to me.) what did the Marine Corp do with recruits like these?
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Dear Bill, I know you were in the marines, which of these characters were you when you first went in?
Was their really a character like jiffy?( Sounds like a character disorder to me.) what did the Marine Corp do with recruits like these?
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Jiffy has a make or break personality. If he can be brought into the fold, he would be a powerful ally. If incorrigible, he will be mustered out within his first week. The military doesn't want sheep, but it doesn't need dissidents either.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Bill, something tells me that Happy Valley isn't supposed to be very happy... lol Something else tells me that these two are going to make that whole crew crazy! :)
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Hi Bill, something tells me that Happy Valley isn't supposed to be very happy... lol Something else tells me that these two are going to make that whole crew crazy! :)
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
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They are the challenge that proves the effectiveness of a boot camp scenario. The best swords take a lot of hammering to get them into shape.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I am glad I am not in the Army. I would feel hard put to deal with this kind of recruits and try to get them into a reasonable state of mind to protect our country!
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I am glad I am not in the Army. I would feel hard put to deal with this kind of recruits and try to get them into a reasonable state of mind to protect our country!
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Your military is made up of these kind of men and women, Rebecca. Many come in ready to be molded, but many also arrive with all the combat spirit present, yet needing redirection.
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I figured this had to be true, but it takes a special drill master to do this kind of work.
Your writing is comical and entertaining. I enjoy reading it.