The Recipe
A teenager is told to make her own breakfast.12 total reviews
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, when I was a kid, my idea of cooking a hot meal was peanut butter on toast. I like the gentle humor with a dash of social commentary mixed in.
Nice use of dialogue to push the story along.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Ah, when I was a kid, my idea of cooking a hot meal was peanut butter on toast. I like the gentle humor with a dash of social commentary mixed in.
Nice use of dialogue to push the story along.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you Lee, I appreciate the review. That kind of meal appealed to me too.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh, yeah, certainly time that young lady starting doing some cooking of her own! ;) A fun offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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LOL!! Oh, yeah, certainly time that young lady starting doing some cooking of her own! ;) A fun offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you Yvette, I appreciate the review and the comments.