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Winds of change37 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Sal! Your poem met the syllabic requirements just right and it has an emotional message using the winds as a metaphor for turbulent times in life. Best wishes in the contest!
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Hi Sal! Your poem met the syllabic requirements just right and it has an emotional message using the winds as a metaphor for turbulent times in life. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending along my best as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
I appreciated the parallel picture you added and your use of alliteration to intensify your message in this evocative, Four-Line Poem. Your analogy in the final line was very effective. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I appreciated the parallel picture you added and your use of alliteration to intensify your message in this evocative, Four-Line Poem. Your analogy in the final line was very effective. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind commemts.it is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sally. Your four line poem meets the style standard for the contest. It's clear the poem has nothing to do with blowing hair, it has everything to do with life's stress.
Z :-)))
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Hello Sally. Your four line poem meets the style standard for the contest. It's clear the poem has nothing to do with blowing hair, it has everything to do with life's stress.
Z :-)))
Comment Written 12-May-2020
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Thank you, dear Z. Your kind review means so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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Your welcome Z
Comment from Ben Colder
Looks is if the young lady is acting out your wording. I see nothing wrong with this write. The author grants an insight of a certain mood for the poem. Best wishes.
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Looks is if the young lady is acting out your wording. I see nothing wrong with this write. The author grants an insight of a certain mood for the poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you, dear Ben. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. It is always good to see you. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes Sally those winds do shift in strange ways. Of course, during this pandemic, most of us do have more hair to be tousled (-; Good musical addition to accompany your post.
Mark
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Yes Sally those winds do shift in strange ways. Of course, during this pandemic, most of us do have more hair to be tousled (-; Good musical addition to accompany your post.
Mark
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Mark. I'm glad you enjoyed my four line poem and video. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from Gloria ....
This is some fine poetry, Sally. The wind is a powerful force as you have most aptly illustrated. Showing us the visuals and emotional outcomes of that wild wind.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with this beauty.
Gloria
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This is some fine poetry, Sally. The wind is a powerful force as you have most aptly illustrated. Showing us the visuals and emotional outcomes of that wild wind.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with this beauty.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Gloria, that is so sweet of you! Thank you so much. I am honored. Sending you all the best,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wild youthful days remembered in this poem and we go through this stage before we mature and realise which direction to grow into, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Wild youthful days remembered in this poem and we go through this stage before we mature and realise which direction to grow into, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly dear. I'm glad you enjoyed my four line poem. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from royowen
I tell you the winds of God can certainly do that for one. My thinking is no where near the same thinking as before God got hold of me. A wonderful theme dear Sally, most imaginative, good luck, blessings, Roy
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I tell you the winds of God can certainly do that for one. My thinking is no where near the same thinking as before God got hold of me. A wonderful theme dear Sally, most imaginative, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate the kind and insightful review of my poem. Your review means so much!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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Well done
Comment from Sankey
Good poem and great pic and layout. If I could hear it the song is probably good too. Now back to your stories, please. I know this line is not long enough, as usual.
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Good poem and great pic and layout. If I could hear it the song is probably good too. Now back to your stories, please. I know this line is not long enough, as usual.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the review of my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I know you're over poems right now, but I have a few more coming along with prose. So glad I have Yu our alongside me. Sending you both my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Lovely poem, full of motion and emotion. It has a great feeling of movement, throughout. It's a great photo -- is that you? You look beautiful. The Cat Stevens music goes well with the mood and is much appreciated.
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Lovely poem, full of motion and emotion. It has a great feeling of movement, throughout. It's a great photo -- is that you? You look beautiful. The Cat Stevens music goes well with the mood and is much appreciated.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Someone similar to me about 35+ years ago. I will be 65 this summer, my dear one. (Those children in my profile picture are my grandchildren.) I love you extra for saying that though. My inside beauty will have to carry me through. As long as Jackson thinks so, I'm good. Anyway, I'm delighted you enjoyed this and wrote it very quickly last night and posted this morning. Thanks for lovely review and kindest compliments. Love,
Sal xoxoxo
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I think you still look lovely :-) Anyway, at 62, I'm not far behind! It's the same with my husband; he always thinks I'm a knockout, and that's fine with me! Absolutely, that's what counts! When I was very young and much closer to this world's ideal of beautiful, I never received so much love and appreciation from any boyfriend, as I do now, from my loving husband, in our maturity. It's so amazing! That's what God can do!
And of course, inside beauty is #1 in His Book.
Your grandchildren look so beautiful, wow! God bless you all.
Love, Mary Kay xoxo