Just Once More
A Canzonetta poem for Potlatch Poetry26 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely canzonetta, Yvonne! You really wove that feeling of nostalgia into this poem and I you make me want to hear that familiar tune, too! It's magical scene in the woods and you've convinced me that it's all real!
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Lovely canzonetta, Yvonne! You really wove that feeling of nostalgia into this poem and I you make me want to hear that familiar tune, too! It's magical scene in the woods and you've convinced me that it's all real!
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Oh, Helen, thank you so much for this fantastic review. I'm so glad you could feel the magic of the woods.
Comment from Cindy Decker
A very beautiful enchanting poem. I like the way you describe the setting complete with a Brook, and a sycamore tree. I like the sentiment of wanting to hear a tune one more time, and I surmise it's a long lost love. The photo beautifully complements your poem. I love its rhythm .
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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A very beautiful enchanting poem. I like the way you describe the setting complete with a Brook, and a sycamore tree. I like the sentiment of wanting to hear a tune one more time, and I surmise it's a long lost love. The photo beautifully complements your poem. I love its rhythm .
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the sycamore tree. It's one of my favorite trees.
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You?re welcome😊
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne. I probably should not read critiques or reviews of poetry I do not understand and am not familiar with. This is a style I've never seen and certainly will never write but I did like the descriptive nature of the content of your poem.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Hello Yvonne. I probably should not read critiques or reviews of poetry I do not understand and am not familiar with. This is a style I've never seen and certainly will never write but I did like the descriptive nature of the content of your poem.
Robert
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you. You don't have to know the style or understand it. Just as long as you like the result. 8-)
Comment from Ben Colder
This seems hard but the way you have written it , it seems easy. Love the style. Not many write this type. I find nothing wrong and compliment you for a job well done.
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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This seems hard but the way you have written it , it seems easy. Love the style. Not many write this type. I find nothing wrong and compliment you for a job well done.
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. It wasn't as hard as it may seem. I appreciate your compliments.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ah and what a wistful tone your Canzonetta has, Yvonne.
The dreamy sentiment so aptly illustrated in this enchanted wood. There is something about melodies arising from brooks in enchanted forest that beguiles us.
Written in your always lyrical metre and rhyme.
I think I like this Canzonetta form. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Ah and what a wistful tone your Canzonetta has, Yvonne.
The dreamy sentiment so aptly illustrated in this enchanted wood. There is something about melodies arising from brooks in enchanted forest that beguiles us.
Written in your always lyrical metre and rhyme.
I think I like this Canzonetta form. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Gloria. I like it, too. I may write some others. You should give it a go.
Comment from Ashtar Zaidi
Great Job... !! I really enjoyed it, deep ideas, your energy is infectious, the way how you explained it was fantastic, thank you so much for sharing it, God Bless You... ~Ashtar~
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Great Job... !! I really enjoyed it, deep ideas, your energy is infectious, the way how you explained it was fantastic, thank you so much for sharing it, God Bless You... ~Ashtar~
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for a great review!
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I apprecaite it :)
Comment from judiverse
Beautifully expressed. The emotion really shows. Certain places will bring back the music and memories of the past. And remembering the song brings back memories of that special person, and at the moment you can see him standing there. Lovely description of the place with the brook and enchanted room. This is a lovely a lovely form to work with. It sounds so musical. judi
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Beautifully expressed. The emotion really shows. Certain places will bring back the music and memories of the past. And remembering the song brings back memories of that special person, and at the moment you can see him standing there. Lovely description of the place with the brook and enchanted room. This is a lovely a lovely form to work with. It sounds so musical. judi
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for such wonderful comments, Judi. Much appreciated. I look forward to reading yours.
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You're very welcome. You always have such great suggestions for writing. judi
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Thank you!
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You're welcome. It was a beautiful memory. judi
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are beautiful, engaging, clear and creative. The
reading of the author's words were so awesome. I pondered on the
words and theme of this poem. The artwork is perfect and goes well
with this poem. May you be safe and well.....
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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The author's words are beautiful, engaging, clear and creative. The
reading of the author's words were so awesome. I pondered on the
words and theme of this poem. The artwork is perfect and goes well
with this poem. May you be safe and well.....
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I hope you are safe and well.
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
I like the first sentence used in the second half with the only difference is the pronoun and actions of remembering and stood; you returned to the very spot "it happened" and though you thought it couldn't happen again "it did", ending with the same happy tune. This is a nicely written rhyming Canzonetta. giovanni
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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I like the first sentence used in the second half with the only difference is the pronoun and actions of remembering and stood; you returned to the very spot "it happened" and though you thought it couldn't happen again "it did", ending with the same happy tune. This is a nicely written rhyming Canzonetta. giovanni
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your wonderful comments.
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y/w giovanni
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Canzonet poem speaks very nicely, smoothly, in a free flow of thoughts, about a melody you heard and liked and wish to listen the tune once more; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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This Canzonet poem speaks very nicely, smoothly, in a free flow of thoughts, about a melody you heard and liked and wish to listen the tune once more; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate you lovely comments very much.
