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NaPoWriMo 2020

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Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, The Kit, follows the saying from Russia and finds how it has found its way into every culture as we see its use in action here. I'm not sure a critter would use that kind of restraint in real life. Funny verse.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from January L'Angelle
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This was very cute and fun. The photo is adorable and goes very well with the poem. I liked the rhythm of the poem and the visual cues that you gave. It was very good. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
    Hi! Thank you.
    Have a great weekend :)