Critics Choice
An ode to Autumn12 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A well written 5-7-5 poem with the word Autumn included. Unusual yet appropriate artwork to compliment your work. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A well written 5-7-5 poem with the word Autumn included. Unusual yet appropriate artwork to compliment your work. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Lance, for your encouraging review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count
and interesting approach
by personalizing autumn.
-Effective imagery and alliteration
in line one and a very good
satori-like concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count
and interesting approach
by personalizing autumn.
-Effective imagery and alliteration
in line one and a very good
satori-like concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Pam, for the rave review.
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You are very welcome!