Beeing a bee
A bee's story13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made the life of bee sound so interesting and filled with fun that I am wondering if I should swap places, they have a mission and don't stop until it's done, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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You made the life of bee sound so interesting and filled with fun that I am wondering if I should swap places, they have a mission and don't stop until it's done, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Dear Dolly,Thank you for your review and the five stars. The sense of purpose and industry of a hive of bees is to be greatly admired. Just think what Man would achieve given the same singleminded intention
of the bee. Food for thought Eh, what!! cheers Cass
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A delightful offering of the ways of the mysterious bee and the behavior we associate with them! ;) Great set of quatrains for the contest - best of luck! ;)
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A delightful offering of the ways of the mysterious bee and the behavior we associate with them! ;) Great set of quatrains for the contest - best of luck! ;)
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Dear Friend Thank you for your review and the five stars.
Insects are a fascinating study and I love watching them at work.
Bees are especially interesting and I rate honey as a favorite food
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
Outstanding! What a wonderful story you've created. When I first joined this site I was often criticized for not including art work. I finally figured out how to do that and found it did in fact enhance my presentations. I think this piece would be enhanced with the inclusion of art. Obviously I found your words significant and they are able to stand alone, but....
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Outstanding! What a wonderful story you've created. When I first joined this site I was often criticized for not including art work. I finally figured out how to do that and found it did in fact enhance my presentations. I think this piece would be enhanced with the inclusion of art. Obviously I found your words significant and they are able to stand alone, but....
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Dear Martie, Thank you for your review and the awesome six stars
I totally agree with you about artwork, but I forget how to do things and miss out occasionally. I have Parkinsons disease which plays havoc with my memory at times. I need someone at home to write the instructions down for me one click at a time so I can follow it and then I'll be "set like a jelly". I have always liked bees (mainly fo
