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Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?

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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This an interesting book, and I look froward to each new chapter post. It is easy entertaining writing. It's the kind of book that is relaxing to read. Well done!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
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My daughter has twin RW dogs too. The guard thier place and you can only figure out the rest. Yep, the dog can sit where he please. Are these two ever get married. 13 days is long enought. LOL.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    I can promise a proposal at the end. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Ben Colder on 19-Apr-2020
    You make it so easy for a person like me to jump right back into the drift of things.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I had not seen the name Edger before (does it rhyme with ledger, or is it a variation of Edgar?) Tranquilizing a Rottweiler took a professional. I love the vet's friendly manner. Is this a malaprop? a large doze of acepromazine
I mean, I guess it made the dog doze long-term, but I think you mean dose.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    I will make that correction. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
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So glad Edger is going to be all right. The people who are after Mac are really desperate if they tranquilized the dog and ransacked Mac's house. Wondering what they thought they might find. All the security is doing no good. This is so suspenseful! Give us a clue who's behind all this and who murdered Megan. Great work. judi

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    I have it all worked out, I hope. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
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Awe, how sweet is this, Barbara. He is a big guy but the soft heart is that of McKenzie. She just loves dogs and him especially. I loved the chapter and I can't wait to be reading along. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the kind reveiw.
Comment from Sankey
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This was your usual style. A lovely story about a terrific dog. I wonder if you are a dog person in reaL life? Did you have any dogs like Edger and the other one? A couple of spags or suggestions. But (be)sure to push water

"I guess we (can) OR (should)set him on the floor

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    I will check those areas. Thank you for the kind review. I have never owned a Rotweiler, many friends have had them, but I do, right now own a Dacshund. Other dogs in my previous stories, I have owned.
reply by Sankey on 20-Apr-2020
    I mention a Rotweiler in my biography. Bear was his name. The sweetest dog with the signature bark. Gentle as ever. Not trained to be aggressive. The neighbour's dog.
Comment from Sally Law
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Ah, poor Edger. I guess the person who did this is after Mackenzie. Dogs are so smart and protective. It sounds like Mackenzie and Edger are inseparable. She's a real trooper if she thinks she can lift a 145 pound Rottweiler.
One typo: doze>dose. I look forward to the next chapter.

Sending you my best today as always, and please stay well!
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the kind review and I will make the change.
Comment from royowen
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So, the important thing is Edgar is safe, the vet had said the tranquilliser was usually used on horses, (perhaps Edgar's really a horse disguised as dog) I'm so glad the dog is OK, but how did these people get in without being noticed, well done Barbara, a great episode, blessings, Roy
Typo : His blood showed a large (doze) of...dose?

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the kind review. I think there's some problems with the police department.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a nice chapter. I'm glad the dog is Okay. He sounds like a very well-trained dag. Everyone is taking care of him. I'm enjoying this and looking forward to your next edition.
Beth

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the supportive review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Thanks God, Edgar is ok, I mean he will be ok. Now we see another face of Logan, he is loyal not only to McKanzie but towards her pet too. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the kind review.