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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "(new leaf on a tree)"An artful mix of poetic forms.
26 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Fluffy, little family tree is getting a new leaf/Paige added on. I like the artistic concept and the haiku, too. Naturally occurring long 'e' sound in first line in 'leaf' and 'tree' is nice.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Fluffy, little family tree is getting a new leaf/Paige added on. I like the artistic concept and the haiku, too. Naturally occurring long 'e' sound in first line in 'leaf' and 'tree' is nice.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Your excellent review is a wonderful uplift to receive. Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How wonderful! Congratulations! This is great news and you made me smile, the birth of a new baby always gives us hope, a sweet loving write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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How wonderful! Congratulations! This is great news and you made me smile, the birth of a new baby always gives us hope, a sweet loving write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly. I appreciate you checking this out and knowing that you have smiled over it. My two children were winter and spring arrivals. I have one grandson, and I had a lot of fun doing the picture for this. xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Whether true or not for your own family, it is a good verse for this contest.
Spring does start with a new lease/leaf on life (-:
Thanks for the peek.
Mark
P.S. When we awoke on Saturday, we had a dusting of snow! The forecast did not come true, which had predicted 3-5 inches.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Whether true or not for your own family, it is a good verse for this contest.
Spring does start with a new lease/leaf on life (-:
Thanks for the peek.
Mark
P.S. When we awoke on Saturday, we had a dusting of snow! The forecast did not come true, which had predicted 3-5 inches.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Wow...I hope all the plants are doing okay. We hardly even had a dusting in Memphis this year...tons of rain though. Thank you for reviewing, Mark. Stay safe!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Janet. The artwork and its symbolism is very creative. I like the metaphor of the new leaf on the tree representing a new addition to the family. Of course your haiku meets the standard for the style.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Hello Janet. The artwork and its symbolism is very creative. I like the metaphor of the new leaf on the tree representing a new addition to the family. Of course your haiku meets the standard for the style.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you greatly, my friend. I had a lot of fun doing that tree. :-)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a lovely Haiku. 'New leaf on a tree' what a nice thought ad what a great illustration. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely Haiku. 'New leaf on a tree' what a nice thought ad what a great illustration. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Jen. I truly appreciate your review and super comments. Smiles, Janet
Comment from joycetreasures
Spangle,
Your haiku is beautiful, simple and clear what you tried to say about the new leaf on the family tree. The photo is so fitting for your haiku. I like it very much. The new daughter arrives in the first day of spring, and adds to the family tree. How sweet? Good job!! Thanks for sharing. Happy writing:-)
No errors saw. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Spangle,
Your haiku is beautiful, simple and clear what you tried to say about the new leaf on the family tree. The photo is so fitting for your haiku. I like it very much. The new daughter arrives in the first day of spring, and adds to the family tree. How sweet? Good job!! Thanks for sharing. Happy writing:-)
No errors saw. Good job!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. I truly appreciate it and I'm happy to know you like the posting.
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Hi Janet - this is a delightful well written harbinger of Spring and the future. Great art work - you are obviously multi-talented. Just curious, was this written as an announcement? If so Congratulations - Jerry
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Hi Janet - this is a delightful well written harbinger of Spring and the future. Great art work - you are obviously multi-talented. Just curious, was this written as an announcement? If so Congratulations - Jerry
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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LOL Since I'm 76, I doubt that I'll be giving birth any time soon. However, I do have a seven year old grandson. My two children were winter and spring babies. The inspiration for this just popped into my head. That happens a lot with my postings. Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Jerry. It's truly appreciated!
Comment from Sally Law
Congratulations! I love my babies and grands. They are all so special. Three of our grandchildren share the same Spring birthday this week. Beautiful and aptly illustrated. Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the contest,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Congratulations! I love my babies and grands. They are all so special. Three of our grandchildren share the same Spring birthday this week. Beautiful and aptly illustrated. Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the contest,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you greatly, Sally. I'm always very happy to receive your responses. Babies are blessings held close to our hearts. I have one grandchild and he is seven now. Big hugs, Janet
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
An amazingly innovative way of announcing an expectant birth. Bravo for your imagination. It's always the plain and simple truth that evades us until someone like you comes along and shows it like it is. Thanks for sharing your smashing idea.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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An amazingly innovative way of announcing an expectant birth. Bravo for your imagination. It's always the plain and simple truth that evades us until someone like you comes along and shows it like it is. Thanks for sharing your smashing idea.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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You have uplifted my heart with this wonderful review, Raffaelina. I love the variety of postings at FS allowing us to connect to so many talented poets and prose writers. Thank you for the big smile on my face right now! Safety and health to you and yours, Janet
(Did you catch the homonyms in the picture being used to honor writers of all kinds? I had a good time figuring out what names to use.) :-)
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Yes, of course, that enabled my review. Superb!
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Happy dance!
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
For as much as I know about haikus this is a well crafted poem. I love the simplicity of it but also how the simple words come together to make something very deep and meaningful.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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For as much as I know about haikus this is a well crafted poem. I love the simplicity of it but also how the simple words come together to make something very deep and meaningful.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Your lovely review is truly appreciated! (Did you catch the homonyms in the picture being used to honor writers of all kinds? I had a good time figuring out the names.) :-)
