Lost in time
Buried memories19 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all twenty syllables in this deeply emotional and appealing piece. It's great that you left it open to the reader's interpretation. That could be a sad cry or a happy one! :-)
If I had a 6, you'd get it!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent use of all twenty syllables in this deeply emotional and appealing piece. It's great that you left it open to the reader's interpretation. That could be a sad cry or a happy one! :-)
If I had a 6, you'd get it!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Many thanks thanks Janice for the great review. Jen.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
How true this poem is. Memories are very powerful. When I was sixteen, I made Mother a batch of Parker House Rolls. Twenty years later she said she could still smell them.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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How true this poem is. Memories are very powerful. When I was sixteen, I made Mother a batch of Parker House Rolls. Twenty years later she said she could still smell them.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the lovely review. Jen.
Comment from kahpot
It is amazing what triggers our memories, you have described these excellently in this well presented short work, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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It is amazing what triggers our memories, you have described these excellently in this well presented short work, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Many thanks Kahpot.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. I can identify with your piece as I believe most others will, too. Illustrated nicely. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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This is excellent. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. I can identify with your piece as I believe most others will, too. Illustrated nicely. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thanks Marilyn.
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Many thanks for your kind words. Jen.
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Many thanks Marilyn for your kind words. Jen.
Comment from lyenochka
You described just how the memory works - sparked by sound, smell or story. And then some memories can incite our emotions, too. Well said in these brief lines. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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You described just how the memory works - sparked by sound, smell or story. And then some memories can incite our emotions, too. Well said in these brief lines. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thanks Helen.
Comment from country ranch writer
Yes this near and dear to my heart it brings me back to a time of long ago. The sights smells bring back memories of a happier time.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Yes this near and dear to my heart it brings me back to a time of long ago. The sights smells bring back memories of a happier time.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the the great review and super stars. Jen.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I truly love this contest entry, it is simple yet it displays all the emotion needed for the content. Very nicely done and the wording is what I can relate to. The last song my sons and I danced to before they were killed, brings me to my knees
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I truly love this contest entry, it is simple yet it displays all the emotion needed for the content. Very nicely done and the wording is what I can relate to. The last song my sons and I danced to before they were killed, brings me to my knees
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Barb. I really appreciate your comments. Love. Jen
Comment from RodG
The Speaker could be any of us who often seek story ideas from stored memories. Yes, sometimes the smallest thing will evoke tears. You compress this truth nicely in only 20 syllables. Rod
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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The Speaker could be any of us who often seek story ideas from stored memories. Yes, sometimes the smallest thing will evoke tears. You compress this truth nicely in only 20 syllables. Rod
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Many thanks Rod.
Comment from Lorraine Rizzuto
Your visualization is wonderful, I can feel the beauty in this poem since I have lost many loved ones and i too would like to cry sometime. It is easy to get lost in a song which was shared by someone that you love and is gone.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Your visualization is wonderful, I can feel the beauty in this poem since I have lost many loved ones and i too would like to cry sometime. It is easy to get lost in a song which was shared by someone that you love and is gone.
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Lorraine. So glad you liked it. Jen.