Slippin' the Pink Slip
Dressing-down with a twist27 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
After all that worry, she's totally okay! LOL. Social media has a lot to answer for, but in this case, no it didn't. I loved all the lead up, the worry, the apologies and in the end she's the girl of the moment! Well done, this was a wonderful script! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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After all that worry, she's totally okay! LOL. Social media has a lot to answer for, but in this case, no it didn't. I loved all the lead up, the worry, the apologies and in the end she's the girl of the moment! Well done, this was a wonderful script! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by! I aim to amuse--glad I hit the funny bone! Cheers. LIZ (contest long over; didn't win, never do--nary an honorable mention!)
Comment from estory
Studded with little quips, this really trips along and you had a great twist at the end; very humorous. It really is a tale of expectations and misinterpreting communications that classic comedy is based on. This kind of device goes back to ancient Greek drama and it still works today. estory
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Studded with little quips, this really trips along and you had a great twist at the end; very humorous. It really is a tale of expectations and misinterpreting communications that classic comedy is based on. This kind of device goes back to ancient Greek drama and it still works today. estory
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by! I aim to amuse--glad I hit the funny bone! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this fun short script. Yes. Social media can get us into trouble sometimes. But you have to be really a party type to get into that kind of trouble. I like the happy ending.
Well done. I will post some more scripts, too.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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I like this fun short script. Yes. Social media can get us into trouble sometimes. But you have to be really a party type to get into that kind of trouble. I like the happy ending.
Well done. I will post some more scripts, too.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you Lisa. I had a blast writing this! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This humour script is very interestingly, entertainingly, briefly and directional and moving with nice character role playing appropriate in space and order; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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This humour script is very interestingly, entertainingly, briefly and directional and moving with nice character role playing appropriate in space and order; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from equestrik
This is a really fun story full of dread and anticipation of what the misdeed is and then the fun twist at the end. Well written story that held interest throughout.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is a really fun story full of dread and anticipation of what the misdeed is and then the fun twist at the end. Well written story that held interest throughout.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I aim to amuse--glad I hit the funny bone. Stop by anytime. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from amada
I like this short script with a becoming solution. The surprise ending was a good ending. I am scared of those needed in my arms as well. I guess alcohol helps o stabilize the senses. Just saying...
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I like this short script with a becoming solution. The surprise ending was a good ending. I am scared of those needed in my arms as well. I guess alcohol helps o stabilize the senses. Just saying...
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed dancing the twist! This is based on a true event re the IV bar bet--in real life the boss pretended not to have heard about it; he did call her into the office but instead of firing her, as she expected, he gave her the tote bag! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from lyenochka
Love it! I like how you set us up for a downer but then you surprise us with a happy ending! And I would like someone like Charlene to be my phlebotomist as I often ask for a child's needle because they can't find my veins!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Love it! I like how you set us up for a downer but then you surprise us with a happy ending! And I would like someone like Charlene to be my phlebotomist as I often ask for a child's needle because they can't find my veins!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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So glad you appreciated the script--I like the ending too! Thanks for stopping by, Helen. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Bill Schott
Soo- funny! Between Charlene's mother and Her dialogue, and the final revelation at the end, these characters grab and hold the readers' attention until we're released and relieved. Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Soo- funny! Between Charlene's mother and Her dialogue, and the final revelation at the end, these characters grab and hold the readers' attention until we're released and relieved. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you Bill! Bonus appreciated; even more appreciated is your letting me know how much you enjoyed the play. Glad you got as much of a kick out of the reading as I did in the writing. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Spitfire
Great title. Mom's sure up to date on what can be done on a fax machine. The use of alliteration in the exchange is the humor. Nice twist at the end and believable too when her boss stands in awe of her bold trick.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Great title. Mom's sure up to date on what can be done on a fax machine. The use of alliteration in the exchange is the humor. Nice twist at the end and believable too when her boss stands in awe of her bold trick.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank Shari--glad you were entertained. I had such fun writing this script--originally just a story wherein only the daughter spoke, as if in response to her mother and her boss, whose words she relayed to the reader. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Susan X Smith
Funny story which rings true about a Facebook post coming back to haunt someone. I like the fact that this time it had a happy ending. Thanks for sharing this one. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Funny story which rings true about a Facebook post coming back to haunt someone. I like the fact that this time it had a happy ending. Thanks for sharing this one. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thanks Susan. I had a blast writing this script: inspired by a true story. Cheers. LIZ