Mister Cardinal
20 Word Poem14 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are lucky to have these sweet birds, I have never seen one and we don't have them in the UK. You brought the scene to my eyes here in your words Val, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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You are lucky to have these sweet birds, I have never seen one and we don't have them in the UK. You brought the scene to my eyes here in your words Val, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your poem was fresh piece to see. I liked the format and the flow.
It was an easy read. I apprec9your notes explaining the theme of your poem.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Your poem was fresh piece to see. I liked the format and the flow.
It was an easy read. I apprec9your notes explaining the theme of your poem.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A legend divinely thought and mortally expressed in twenty words, the scarlet messenger came to visit you with a message from heaven and message of sweet memories of your life long ago, I liked and enjoyed the free flow of thoughts; exceptional; you may please buy and gift me a $ 25 MD gift card to help me make a Premier Shield upgraded member.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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A legend divinely thought and mortally expressed in twenty words, the scarlet messenger came to visit you with a message from heaven and message of sweet memories of your life long ago, I liked and enjoyed the free flow of thoughts; exceptional; you may please buy and gift me a $ 25 MD gift card to help me make a Premier Shield upgraded member.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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As much as I LOVE this "exceptional, I cannot donate anything at the moment. But I will gladly, give you a nomination for expert reviewer. If this changes your opinion of my poem, I am saddened but will understand somehow. You have always given me kind reviews, which I sincerely appreciate and thank you for this one. Val Crisson
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Sorry for a 6-star rating, I am extremely sorry for asking you for a gift, though I know giving gift is a choice to a giver. Sorry, please and please never give me a nomination for an expert reviewer; even after 20 nominations I have not received a selection in the past. God has made no plan for making me an expert reviewer.
God has already given me recognition.
Now FS has given me a special membership status and I am glad with the status of a REVIEWER MEMBERSHIP.
I am trying and continuing the process of becoming a Premier Shield upgraded membership, as God has planned for me a Premier Shield membership in addition to my Special Membership and Premier Author Membership.
I hope and believe I will become a Premier Shield member for like you I also trust God and have faith in God and I do believe in God?s plan for me.
Thank you for considering me a good reviewer, but I repeat please do not nominate me for an expert reviewer.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
22/03/2020 Sunday Night
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Wonderful image and
nice presentation, Val.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have used your 20 words well.
-Effective imagery and personification
of the cardinal.
-I like the message he has sent, too,
along with the concluding line.
-Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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-Wonderful image and
nice presentation, Val.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have used your 20 words well.
-Effective imagery and personification
of the cardinal.
-I like the message he has sent, too,
along with the concluding line.
-Well done! Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you, for the beautiful review
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You are welcome.