World Peace
2-10-2 Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables to convey a moving hopeful message about what should be what all want universally--peace and sanity.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables to convey a moving hopeful message about what should be what all want universally--peace and sanity.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate it!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 2-10-2 for the contest
with wonderful social commentary
that can be interpreted in many ways,
from global warming and political extremism,
to the emergence of viruses.
Our world needs help, its fate
rests in the hands of its people.
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent 2-10-2 for the contest
with wonderful social commentary
that can be interpreted in many ways,
from global warming and political extremism,
to the emergence of viruses.
Our world needs help, its fate
rests in the hands of its people.
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate it!
Comment from QC Poet
Great poem 2-10-2 syllable poem about the Corona Virus. Picture goes very well with your posting. Blessings to you and your family. Stay Safe and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Great poem 2-10-2 syllable poem about the Corona Virus. Picture goes very well with your posting. Blessings to you and your family. Stay Safe and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "it needs
World Peace.", because peace of mind is exactly what the people of this world need!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
John 14:27 New International Version (NIV)
27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "it needs
World Peace.", because peace of mind is exactly what the people of this world need!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
John 14:27 New International Version (NIV)
27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I have enjoyed reading that verse. Thanks for sharing! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from kahpot
Yes it certainly does, love your chosen artwork for this short piece, the world and the people (some) are falling apart, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Yes it certainly does, love your chosen artwork for this short piece, the world and the people (some) are falling apart, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)