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Down By the Ocean

Inner Peace..........

17 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your relaxing contest entry, Harmony. Good job with the contest prompt. Your syllables are correct per line. I like the art you chose. Your words read smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hi Jan, thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe.....Maria
Comment from Fonda Little
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My favorite part was, "Peace floods my inner being
Surrender happens", because that's what happens to me as well near the ocean and is a great way of explaining it!

The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,

John 7:38 New International Version (NIV)

38 Whoever believes in me, as Scripture has said, rivers of living water will flow from within them."

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, charming piece. It describes that wonderful time when we could go to the beach; beaches weren't closed!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hi Janice, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe.....Maria
Comment from Puzzle
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Ahh yea this three line poem has me more relaxed than ever!!! This is what we need more of right now. With everything that is going on I'm enjoying reading the calm stories and poems. Nice work!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, yes I think the ocean is somewhat magical, love your chosen artwork for this short poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a cute little poem with a calming message, important in these stressful times. I love the Fan Art piece that you chose to go with it. It really sets it off nicely.

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
    words. I hope you are doing well. harmony13
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a wonderfully worded three line poem for the contest. Your presentation is lovely as well. May you have a delightful weekend.
Patricia

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
    I hope you have a delightful weekend too!