Enduring self-isolation
(3-5-3) The outlook is bleak for many.12 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your well-written contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job on the syllable count per line. I like the references (play on words) to the window-- dull, glazed, paneful, and windowed world. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your well-written contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job on the syllable count per line. I like the references (play on words) to the window-- dull, glazed, paneful, and windowed world. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your positive review.
Comment from jenintorre
This is me at the moment, in isolation. Your 3-5-3 poem describes the feeling very well. It is very surreal. I think this is an excellent entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is me at the moment, in isolation. Your 3-5-3 poem describes the feeling very well. It is very surreal. I think this is an excellent entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Isn't it lucky you have writing to keep you interested. I am sure this social and physical isolation will make people more resourceful.
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Yes I agree. X