Because I Love You
Free verse contest. An outburst of love15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned about an outburst of love. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. blessings, teri
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned about an outburst of love. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. blessings, teri
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Teri, Thank you. I am so pleased with your review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This is so fresh, vivid, creative imagery. There's so much to praise--it would be a cheat to cut/paste the whole! This is a fine example of a love poem, nothing trite or sappy here. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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This is so fresh, vivid, creative imagery. There's so much to praise--it would be a cheat to cut/paste the whole! This is a fine example of a love poem, nothing trite or sappy here. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Elisabeth, thank you so much. Lovely review.
Comment from Amanda Geering
Love is such an uplifting and joyful emotion. I too have the thoughts and feelings that the world moves because of my love for my family. You captured some wonderful natural events that love blooms from beautifully!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Love is such an uplifting and joyful emotion. I too have the thoughts and feelings that the world moves because of my love for my family. You captured some wonderful natural events that love blooms from beautifully!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Amanda. Nice review!
Comment from Mark Valentine
This one captures the POV of a person in love - everything is viewed through that wonderful rose-colored lens - the sun rises and sets, the fish jump, and the seagulls fly in sympathetic celebration. Great job capturing that feeling.
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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This one captures the POV of a person in love - everything is viewed through that wonderful rose-colored lens - the sun rises and sets, the fish jump, and the seagulls fly in sympathetic celebration. Great job capturing that feeling.
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for this nice review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse writing prompt.
This well penned piece describes the results of the author's love very nicely.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse writing prompt.
This well penned piece describes the results of the author's love very nicely.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Sharon, thank you very much for the nice review.
